Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.

Essay topics:

Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.

It is important for an effective leader to be respected by his peers as the degree of respect for a leader among his peers is quintessential to the goodwill of his/her's group.

An effective leader is someone who has the ability to put things well into others' perspective. An idea can be executed only when all the members of the group have a clear and precise idea about each others' role. A leader can communicate effectively with his peers only when he is venerated amongst them. The respect is really important because it gives the notion of inspiration for the peers which is pivotal to do any work. The leader may have good moral judgment, but if he/she has no respect among their peers, ideas cannot be communicated effectively and the group will be in a state of a turmoil. For instance, the manager or head coach is the ultimate head of a football team. If there is no sense of respect among the players for the manager, his tactics can't be implemented properly and the players won't be inspired to play under him which will ultimately engender to down-fall of the team's results. Hence, the modicum of respect that peers have for their leader highly correlates to the group's performance. Inspite of respect among his/her peers, it is important for the leader to have good moral judgment because the decisions taken by the leader will affect the group's fortunes as well.

Hence, it is important for the leader to be revered among his peers.

Votes
Average: 5 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...ave a clear and precise idea about each others role. A leader can communicate effectiv...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 764, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...he players for the manager, his tactics cant be implemented properly and the players...
^^^^
Line 5, column 998, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groups'' or 'group's'?
Suggestion: groups'; group's
...r their leader highly correlates to the groups performance. Inspite of respect among h...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, really, so, well, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 2235.4752809 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 255.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70980392157 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55833591628 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494117647059 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1891932606 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.181818182 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357415551109 0.243740707755 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15773753987 0.0831039109588 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116434978383 0.0758088955206 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307125022545 0.150359130593 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473206940446 0.0667264976115 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.