Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.
It is of utmost importance that leader maintain a healthy relation with all of his peers as they are the catalysts behind his success.
Effective leaders are the one who are continuously are encouraged by their peers and colleagues even under the most terrifying conditions. They always try to push their limits for a leader who practices good conducts and is always respectful to everyone. Although this might seem to be a contradictory thought but it holds true for most of the leaders of today's world who are at the acme of success.
Peers are the most guiding and supporting force behind every leader who seek to find solutions to today's elaborate world. Leaders who always try to make environments around them more encouraging instead of sticking to some perfunctory tasks are the one's most liked by their peers. Even trying to respect their peers instead of just being bossy or domineering is one of the characteristic that define successful leaders.
The greatest example of such leaders can be Steve Jobs who invented Apple. He used to respect innovative ideas, may that be the most stupid one's, anyone who tries to suggest something. Instead of sticking to some moral judgement or dominating atmosphere, Steve used to ask his employees to come up with solutions to his stated problems which used to make his decision making much more easy and productive. Such relations with your peers always try to elevate your definitions of success.
Although there might be some exceptions to such thoughts where an employee might just be jealous or trying to take advantages of his/her position. But such behaviors would ultimately lead to his failure even if he tries to give his 100 percent.
At the end I would like to conclude that a leader is the one who is responsible for maintaining a healthy environment around him which ultimately leads to an organization's success. Hence, a leader should always try to respect his peers as well as other people around him instead of just being dominant.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 21, column 159, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'organizations'' or 'organization's'?
Suggestion: organizations'; organization's
...around him which ultimately leads to an organizations success. Hence, a leader should always ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 338.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97928994083 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71798181749 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505917159763 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9526849561 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.2 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228605777859 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809743669026 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476498453694 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133155066505 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445178817953 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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