To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.
Leader is a person who carry egalitarian concepts. The Author’s claim “To be effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards” hold some merits as leader is judged by people through his/her moral and ethical standards. Many may consider that leader and ethical or moral standards not go in hand by hand but following reasons will retract such concepts hold by people.
Firstly, history have plethora of examples, where person probity have made him/her a great leader. For India, Mahatma Gandhi is consider as father of the nation, would Mahatma Gandhi did able to entitled with such eponymous if he have followed non-violence path? He had always eluded non-violence path and encourage others to follow same path. His moral standards and ethical conduct was the main factors resulting in people of India entrusting him. Mahatma Gandhi have always cherished egalitarian concept and because of his altruistic nature, people have great reverence towards him. There are many other leaders who have renowned as effective leader through his/her probity.
Secondly, In this Information era, people of nation have become much active to ascertain the responsibility of leader towards people. Thus, if leader fails to fulfill his/her duty, it will incensed people and ultimately will result in depriving leader of his/her powers. Leader is being elected by people in hope that leader will work in interest of people, thus, if leader fails to achieve expectation held by people will result in grievances and hatred from people. In India, people have shown their hatred when leaders have deceited their people by doing various scams, 3G, Coal, etc. and now, congress people's are deprived of their powers they once had.
However, leader being too honest and forthright is also considered to be insidious for people as well as for leader. Consider a situation, where leader come to know about the terrorists invaded in his/her nation, telling people about situation will create great chaos and turmoil among people, thus, in some situation leader should not prefer to be honest. Disclosing polices and plans to people of nation also have certain disadvantages, like if leader discloses the plan about the way they are planning to entrap terrorist, then terrorists will become more cautious and leader will never able to remove terrorists. Thus, sometimes leader being too ethical and adherent towards moral standards might be harmful from him/her and also for nation.
On wrapping up, Leaders are the person, who is judged by people through his probity and leader failing in maintaining ethical and moral conduct might lead to great opprobrium from people, However, in certain cases, leaders should exploit their conduct for maintaining peace among people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: Much may; A good deal of may
...gh his/her moral and ethical standards. Many may consider that leader and ethical or mor...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...at leader. For India, Mahatma Gandhi is consider as father of the nation, would Mahatma ...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'incense'
Suggestion: incense
... fails to fulfill his/her duty, it will incensed people and ultimately will result in de...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and ultimately will result in depriving leader of his/her powers. Leader is bein...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, as for, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2368.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 444.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50851564852 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495495495495 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 719.1 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4228585918 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.631578947 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3684210526 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27840518252 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953079137 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110729220986 0.0758088955206 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187376307828 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128170362055 0.0667264976115 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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