To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.
A leader is chosen by the people for effective administration. This leader could have a minimal role as a government official or a chief minister of a state to the president or prime minister of a country. Whatever may be the role into which a leader fits in, his responsibilities towards an individual is the same. A public official is appointed to serve the common needs of the citizens and hence, it is very much essential for him to maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.
Most often, a leader is looked upon as a role model in the same way as a child who learns the basic qualities from his parents. As a result of which, an effective leader should not spoil his name under corruption - one of the grave issues prevailing in the entire world. He should strive hard to abolish such an evil from the whole society as such. For instance, India’s prime minister brought forth demonetization two years back in order to eradicate black currencies and fake notes. Even though middle class and poor people struggled due to standing in long queues in order to get money from the bank, the new system completely eradicated the usage of illegal money. such steps could be taken by a person who foresees a better nation devoid of corruption.
Moreover, a great leader has the responsibility to accomplish the needs of the people by knowing their concerns. it could be evident only through actions and not by words. For example, a public official should visit a calamity struck city in order to understand the real scenario of the aftermath of flood or earthquake. Just sitting in the office and providing relief funds would not solve the problem. only a good ruler would visit the people, get to know their sufferings and comfort them. According to the saying, “Action speaks louder than words”, we can judge an official only through his interactions with the citizens of his nation on a one to one basis.
Nevertheless, there are incidences where a leader must forego his moral standard for a short duration during times of emergencies. In order to control a riot, shooting order need to be given. but such laws should be enforced keeping in mind that humans are not affected. At the same time, criminals should be presented in the court and necessary punishments given, not only to correct them but also to repent for the sins committed by them. hence, the qualities and deeds of a public official are accountable factors to be taken into consideration.
I end by saying that, ethical and moral standards are essential factors to be a great leader. Like the doctors taking an oath before starting their practice, it is highly recommended for public officials, as their task is not restricted to an individual but a society. leaders should be looked upon as role models and not as persons who are prone to criticisms. there should not be any kind of compromise when it comes to serving the nation selflessly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, kind of, as a result, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2434.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 506.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81027667984 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7592412415 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529644268775 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 758.7 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9091248938 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.36 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.24 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338573639 0.243740707755 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802636022007 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711870409666 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189887871874 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101354581454 0.0667264976115 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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