The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
"United we stand, divided we all", this saying can be applied to every aspect of our lives. I completely agree with the point presented by the author that best way to created leaders is by cooperation not by competition. There are myriad of advantages of teaching teamwork in place of the conventional "survival of the fittest" methodology.
First, good leaders tend to carry the whole team together, by compensating shortcomings of one member with the help of another one. If leaders are created using the competition method they will not be able to draw out the full potential of team because they have no sense of teamwork and don't know how to bring everyone on the same level. On the other hand, if leaders are raised by instilling a sense of cooperation they are better prepared to face the world and lead their group efficiently. They will not try to solve any obstacle they face alone rather develop a solution together to overcome it.
Second, competition can lead to development of characterstics like envy, arrogance etc in one's attitude, which can lead to disturbances in the working of an organization. For example, consider two international soccer teams one of Portugal and other Croatia, both are great teams but their ideologies are totally different. Portugal on one hand depends only on a single striker while Croatia values teamwork. The results of their ideologies is clearly visible in the standings of the world cup, where Croatia is far ahead of Portugal. A similar reasoning can be applied here also, that even though you have the best player in the world without teamwork you cannot cross every hurdle in your way.
I am not saying that there should be no sense of competition among the younglings, because that will make them complacent. There should be a regulated sense of competition so that they strive to do better as a team rather than individually.
Finally, to conclude I would like to say that a sense of collaboration is the most essential thing in a leader and we should try every possible way to encourage that feeling. There should be some competitiveness but not at the cost of teamwork.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, still, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 364.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93406593407 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92187862739 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546703296703 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1732145657 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.25 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108568835699 0.243740707755 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345001199397 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396384352608 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548463468039 0.150359130593 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0087795343953 0.0667264976115 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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