The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition
The issue statement states that the best way to prepare the younger generation for leadership positions in various sectors such as government, industry, or other fields can be done by instilling a sense of cooperation in them and not competition. The claim can be agreeable to some extent but not entirely as cooperation is extremely important in the society but even competition has its own importance.
The younger generation who will take up the responsibilities in various sectors should be prepared for it from a small age. This preparation is usually carried out by instilling in them various sets of values which will help in the developement of their character. One such value is of cooperation. Anyone at any stage of his or her life cannot work alone in this world. They need the help of their colleagues or peers in order to carry out their responsibility. Such cooperation will lead to success in whatever endavours the person undertakes. Hence it is very important that people from a young age know the importance of cooperation.
In today's times all the sectors are interdependent. They need the help of each other to complete their work. For example, to launch a product in the market there are various departments which have their own specific role in regards to the product but all the departments need to come together so that the product launch in the market is successful. The research team needs to make a new product after which the manufacturing team manufactures it followed by the finance team handling all the monetary operations after which the legal team makes sure that all the rules and regulations are complied with after which the design team then decides the packaging of the product and finally the marketing team makes sure that the consumers are aware of the product and they purchase it. So we can see that for even the smallest product the company needs cooperation from all the departments. Therefore, in whatever field a person goes he will need a sense of cooperation without which he will not be able to work.
As we have seen that cooperation is very important but even competition has its own sense of importance. Competition when taken in a positive outlook will be highly beneficial as it brings out the best in people. Competition makes people strive to become better and hence achieve their full potential. When there is a healthy competition between peers it will help them in giving their best and therefore achieving what they strive for. So a bit sense of competition is also important so that people put their best foot forward.
Hence it can be seen that cooperation and competition are both important for the success of a person and therefore such values such be instilled in the young people but only in a positive way as extremes of the competition can also lead to disastorous result for everyone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... competition has its own importance. The younger generation who will take up the...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...atever endavours the person undertakes. Hence it is very important that people from a...
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Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ents which have their own specific role in regards to the product but all the departments nee...
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Suggestion: Hence,
... people put their best foot forward. Hence it can be seen that cooperation and com...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... instilled in the young people but only in a positive way as extremes of the competition can also...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'therefore', 'for example', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231517509728 0.240241500013 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.143968871595 0.157235817809 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0972762645914 0.0880659088768 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0466926070039 0.0497285424764 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0583657587549 0.0444667217837 131% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136186770428 0.12292977631 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0252918287938 0.0406280797675 62% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85085690829 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0233463035019 0.030933414821 75% => OK
Particles: 0.00778210116732 0.0016655270985 467% => OK
Determiners: 0.108949416342 0.0997080785238 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0272373540856 0.0249443105267 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0233463035019 0.0148568991511 157% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2863.0 2732.02544248 105% => OK
No of words: 488.0 452.878318584 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86680327869 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.303278688525 0.366273622748 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241803278689 0.280924506359 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174180327869 0.200843997647 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135245901639 0.132149295362 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85085690829 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 219.290929204 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424180327869 0.48968727796 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.7112640171 55.4138127331 86% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.2380952381 23.380412469 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.4110291669 59.4972553346 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.333333333 141.124799967 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2380952381 23.380412469 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.674092028746 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 47.4184231069 51.4728631049 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.578125 1.64882698954 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.477968699942 0.391690518653 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112841802297 0.123202303941 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0759212682679 0.077325440228 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.534505461142 0.547984918172 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.188027658918 0.149214159877 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175832240339 0.161403998019 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997803754417 0.0892212321368 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.338942710294 0.385218514788 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0867482948056 0.0692045440612 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.336306748587 0.275328986314 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108322726134 0.0653680567796 166% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.4325221239 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 7.22455752212 208% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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