The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition
The statement claims that the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. Indeed, the trend shows that, as a result of globalization in economy, technology and many other fields, more and more roles require people to be capable of working with others and cooperate as a group, especially when working for a multi-national company, where a sense of cooperation is extremely important since the employee even required to work with people from another country, who has a complete different background. Thus, cooperation will be a better way to prepare young people for leadership.
First, a great leader needs to be able to cooperate with others. For example, the leaders of those giant technology companies such as Microsoft and Amazon. The reason that those CEOs can achieve such a huge success is not only because they have talent in their field, but also they are great leaders and great cooperators. They know how to unite the resources around them and cooperate with people with different talents and make the great things happen. When Bill Gates first met Paul Allen, the co-founder of Microsoft, the first thing he thought is how can I make him work with me instead of how can I compete with him. He knew that this is the person that if they work together, they can make a difference. It is the cooperating skills that let Bill Gates reach such position.
Second, Leadership is about leading, not competing. No one can be perfect and everyone has its own strength and shortcoming. A sense of cooperation will help people to realize how to fully explore everyone's potential and put them into use. That's what being a leader is about.
Like cooperation will help young people prepare for leadership, competition will serve the same purpose in some particular case. There are certain kind of leadership that their natural is about competition, like running for mayor of a city or running for governor of a state. The prerequisite for this kind of leadership requires a person to be good at competition, only the survivors of the competition will have the chance to leader the people. Therefore, in this case, competition would be the best way to help young people prepare for the leadership.
In general, both cooperation and competition will help young people prepare for leadership. Depending on the field they are going to enter in the future and the kind of leadership they are looking for, the way to prepare for the leadership varies as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, in general, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2118.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90277777778 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75135192483 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.9048653087 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.9 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45 5.21951772744 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401448511004 0.243740707755 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14132217645 0.0831039109588 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166712398747 0.0758088955206 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24981954001 0.150359130593 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153087389037 0.0667264976115 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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