The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Leaders need to have a certain set of qualities in them that make them worthy of their position. These plethora of qualities include resolving conflict, leading by example, being impartial, creating a conducive environment for people she/he is leading. There is saying "youth of today are the leaders of tommorrow", now the claim that states the best way to create leaders is by instilling a sense of cooperation and not competition is a little extreme and treats cooperation and competition to mutually exclusive.
Leaders are individuals who need to respected and considered worthy by others in the group which he/she is leading. The claim competition is something that can be overlooked while engendering leaders is not very cogent. This is beacuse leaders as mentioned need to garner respect must prove that they are best at what they do.For example a politician must prove that he is best suited for the job to the people who vote for him. One of the ways in bringing out the best in a person is through competititon, competition challenges the ideals/position of person who is ought to become the leader as result of which individuals are more dilligent in the stance they take and in order to better their competition tend to become more avid to prove their worth. Usually when we say a person is best at what he is doing and he can lead well, we are saying so because he is better than his contemporaries and others. A good example to prove sense of competition is essential for leadership to accepted is when the captain of cricket team is chosen, there would be several candidates for the job yet because of competition people strive to be the best among them to prove their which is one of the essential qualities of a leader.
Furthermore, the claim gives an idea cooperation is exclusive of competetion, and cooperation is something that is needed for leadership and not competition. Well there are cases where leaders need to demonstrate qualities pertaining to both competition and cooperation. Consider a situation where CEO's of major tech companies are in a race to win a customer. However, one of the CEO's uses unjust methods to winover the customer. In this case the remaining CEO's eventhough competing with one another need to cooperate among themselves to bar such unjust practices.
Some might argue that competition leads discord, scuffles and controversies, So , leaders needed to promote cooperation. This is true in some cases but healthy competition which does not lead to such harmful effects are essential for leaders because just competiton brings the out in an individual/group.
Young people need to be instilled with sevral qualities for them to become leaders some of those include healthy competition and cooperation. To say cooper
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, look, so, still, well, while, for example, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.5258426966 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2326.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 462.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03463203463 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00501596662 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448051948052 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 730.8 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.6689330222 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.222222222 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172379297253 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558451060634 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531471825268 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105503767412 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429221419405 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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