The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition
Leadership in any particular field requires a lot of qualities, and can hold key to the success of any task. That being said, a key quality that leadership must inspire in any group, is team work or co-operation. Team work or co-operation helps employ the divide and rule method and thus complete onerous tasks in quick time and with great efficiency. Thus, in my opinion it is of greater benefit to instill a sense of co-operation in young people to prepare them for leadership rather than asking them to indulge in never ending competition.
Good leadership is always marked by sensible and informed decision making. Naturally, to take an informed decision the leader must think of his whole team or his firm while taking any decision on their behalf. Moreover, it is important for a leader to take into account different opinions of various people in his team or organization, thus helping inspire co-operation. For instance, if the leader of a country considers only his personal benefit or the benefit of his state while making a policy for the entire nation, he would have failed as a leader. Similarly, if a team's captain in football is obsessed with scoring a goal by himself and thus is blinded to the opportunity of making a key pass, he would have foundered a great chance for his team. Citing the said arguments, it can be fairly concluded that co-operation is a quality that is extremely essential for a good leader to possess.
Competition, especially when taken personally is harmful for any leadership. It is important for a leader to understand that the decisions that they make have implications far wider than just relating to their personal interests. Also, competition more often becomes subject to satisfying one's ego rather than trying to perform better and thus can blind any person to the wider implications of their actions. An example of a cricket game where the team is in dire need of runs but the batsman is playing at a slow rate for his personal landmark helps explain this connundrum. Thus competition is often ha
Although, healthy competition provides conditions which help all the competing parties to grow and improve their skills in any given field. One must therefore have healthy competition and not make it their sole aim to perform better than others, but concentrate more on improving themselves.
It's been made extremely lucid throught the given arguments that while healthy competition might help bolster one's skills, a sense of co-operation is of paramount importance to prepare the young people of society for leadership.
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- SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's original headquarters. Moreov 29
- Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated. 50
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, similarly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2151.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 430.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0023255814 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81873992307 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.788169124 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.529411765 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2941176471 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225679014788 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781586670032 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804665019581 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142473663513 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774447904015 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.