The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
In this ever-progressing world, new theories and inventions are promulgated every passing day and same can be asserted for government, industry or any other fields. So, it seems necessary that we prepare a good leader for the future to continue this trend of innovation and while doing so, the process should be started as early as since childhood. It is thus necessary that we instill knowledge required for success as a leader and a sense of cooperation and competition both does that. Saying that both can be advantageous to young people in their survival, I believe that competition does this better than cooperation and hence I side with instilling a sence of competition in young people.
Since we grow ina society and are preety much shaped by our society, it is lucid that we think for the betterment of our society. There are cooperative people and there are competitive people. And where cooperative people tend to keep balance in the society, I believe that it is competitive people who bring the innovation in society. Much of the technical prowess that we are witnessing currently is due to the high competition prevalent in the field of technology.
Competition brings out the best in people and those people shape what is best for a nation. Competition necessitates that your product be the best to capture market. Competition ensures your survival. So, in the field of industry, it is the competitive position that keeps your dominance. Cooperation, on the othe hand, is well known to ensure survival in averages. If you want to be the best, you have to come out best in the competition.
There are arguments to support that instilling sense of cooperation will help better achieve success in life later but there are ample examples to refute such claims. Would Hitler have been what he became if his people did not cooperate with him? On the contrary, would Abraham Lincoln have been successful if he was not competent enough to outcast others? These example help shed light on what is more important; cooperation or competition?
While supporting the idea of instilling sense of competition, I do not mean in any way that cooperation is not needed. Cooperation is required to but for the betterment of a society, country and its people as a whole. To thrive with success and come out the best and do best for the country, one has to be competent.
Thus, it is clear that instilling the sense of competition will best work to raise best leaders and businessmen. While cooperation is also an important trait that a leader must exhibit, I favor competition more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... product be the best to capture market. Competition ensures your survival. So, in the field...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'raise the best'.
Suggestion: raise the best
... sense of competition will best work to raise best leaders and businessmen. While cooperat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, thus, well, while, as to, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2146.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 439.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88838268793 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87813369595 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480637813212 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6472677811 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3043478261 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0869565217 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82608695652 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282580982485 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078847120948 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555566686984 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143260625733 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070142451413 0.0667264976115 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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