"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
Leadership is one of the most important quality that should be possessed by an individual who is working in the department which governs the society and the nation. It is a necessary quality which can lead to a huge development of the society. The way to inculcate this quality should be by developing a character that is able to make other members and people respect and listen. This type of reverence can be achieved by both cooperation and competition, each having its own merits and demerits which are going to be presented in the following paragraphs and also the reason behind why copperation would be better than competition in such a scenario.
Competition has its benefits by providing a sense of need to keep on persistently doing a task better than others. This helps pushing a person to his limits and provides a substantial output. It gives people motivation so as to not get defeated. Competition is a good stratagem in order to bring the best out of an individual. It helps in segregating incompetent people out of the contention and provides with the creamy layer within the census, which can prove beneficial to the development of society.All over the world, the concept of competition is used to determine the best among everyone, like in sports and exams. Competitions, which usually results with a winner, is helpful for discerning out people which are up to the task for benefitting the instituitions.
However, the losers of the competition can feel unsatisfied and will not necessarily look up to the winner with veneration. They might scorn them, and deride their opinions in order to satisfy their ego. This results in chaos and the instituition is left inchoate. Competition, having its benefits, might also result in acrimony among the people which can be deleterious for the instituion. If rather than instilling competition in these young plastic brains, a sense of cooperation is fed then it may result in better leaders. Cooperation can lead to people being more considerate towards each other. Any person who can make other people's voice being heard and is obliging can easily gain their trust and the helm of leadership.
Cooperation can result in harmony among the constituents and smoother running of the industry or the government. More nations are switching towards democracy rather than dictatorship because of the feeling of distributed leadership among the people of the government. A job of the leader is not to order its subordinates to do a task they seem correct, but, being able to carry out an order which everyone seems to be on par with and being able to cooperate is very essential for the scenario to take place.
So, competitions have their benefits in the process of inculcating leadership among the green people of the nation but cooperation would be more beneficial and helpful to produce results which are fruitful and helping. This is because of the inherent qualities of a leader being developed by being more cooperative with the members of the field.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to push' or 'push'.
Suggestion: to push; push
...g a task better than others. This helps pushing a person to his limits and provides a s...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...tial output. It gives people motivation so as to not get defeated. Competition is a good...
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Line 5, column 504, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: All
...eneficial to the development of society.All over the world, the concept of competit...
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Line 13, column 412, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... carry out an order which everyone seems to be on par with and being able to coop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, still, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2526.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 504.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0119047619 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92001751152 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470238095238 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 786.6 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1818340307 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.818181818 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.59090909091 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156546951324 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492522826434 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367604958435 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907890814212 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317897297581 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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