The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling results and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The world is moving towards the globalization where cooperation of each and every country is necessary. The author of the statement suggests that the best way for the society to prepare it's young people is by giving more importance to cooperation than competition. I agree with the statement And argue that the feeling of mutual cooperation young people will be beneficial to the society, but there are also sectors within which sense of competition will help to flourish the individual and the sector itself.
Firstly, when working in groups with cooperation among each other there will be influx of ideas from different people having different background and thought process. This will help for the betterment of the society as people will be working towards the same goal but with innovative ideas that For instance, if five medical experts are working independently for the cure of let's say some kind of cancer then the productivity will be low. If they work together, then the work will be effective and cure to the disease can Be found out quicker. So, cooperation among the people is necessary.
Secondly, the whole world is moving towards globalization, where cooperation among the nations and individual within the nation is essential. The major issues in the world such as global warming, ozone layer depletion, ice cap melting, glacier melting etc will only be resolved by The cooperation among the different countries int he world. For instance, polio, one the dangerous disease of the 21st century was eradicated with help and cooperation of the many countries. The eradication was only possible because of the cooperation among the different scientists, health experts , doctors and event the financial officers who worked towards the single goal of eradicating the polio form the world, and they were successful.
One may argue that the sense of competition will enhance the potential within oneself, but that not be true for all the people. The sense of competition may be beneficial to certain industry like business where salesperson can compete for highest number of sales, which in turn Like, the sense of competition is beneficial in sports industry. For example, the so called rivalry of Messi and Ronaldo, where they say that this healthy competition is what motivates them to put in the hard work day In and, the out of
the sense of competition may be beneficial to certain sector like business and sports, the cooperation among the people is far more advantages to the betterment of the society as a whole.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: from
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Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2134.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10526315789 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76029771109 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471291866029 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.3354256368 60.3974514979 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.428571429 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 23.4991977007 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 5.21951772744 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155761330421 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625929893994 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704439482623 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990999417208 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650174017135 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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