The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
In order to prepare young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields, a society has to instill in them a sense of positive competition because only competition among the people of a society can glean out the best thing for that society.
Every society is based on the success of its people: failures of people in their lives hurt the society as a total while successes of them give the society an opportunity to flourish. Future prosperity of a society entirely depends on its young people and for this fact society must have to prepare them for the days to come. For the betterment of the society, competition among the people is a must because without it the acceleration of prosperity of the society does not increase. For example, if it can be ensured in national level that the best tax payer company of the country will be awarded than the business firms will compete among themselves on the fact that who is going to win the prize because winning the prize does not only provide pride but also acts as a matter of advertisement for the company. However, it is the society which is ultimately benefited because tax money are the source of cost of investment for the society. If there is no competition among the companies than it may happen that the society would lose tax money.
If there is no competition among the students of a class than the learning process will be affected. No competition among themselves will make them inert and they are not going to give effort to learn. Only competition can make sure that each students are learning and this is needed for the society. For example, the admission examination which is held before let students to give a chance to study in a particular study makes the students active and every one wants to do better than the other. Ultimately this enriches the knowledge level of the students which otherwise would not be possible if there was no competition among the students.
Competition among business industry is a must because it the companies make a deal among themselves and increase the cost of their product than it is the people of the society who are going to suffer. On the other hand if it can be ensured that a strong competition is present among the company the cost of products and the quality of products will stay under control. Without competition a sense of cooperation among the industries will hurt the society most. So a sense of positive competition must be instilled in the future generation for the betterment of the society.
However, a sense of cooperation is also required but without the sense of competition the future of a society will face many dangers. A strong sense of cooperation is needed to make the society a better one but it is the competition among people in their fields which are required to the economic and political success of the society.
Imparting a strong sense of positive competition into the young people has no alternative to make the society a successful one in the days to come.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hat the society would lose tax money. If there is no competition among the stude...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, while, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2497.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 527.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73814041746 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67031671002 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.345351043643 0.4932671777 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 824.4 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1007871952 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.421052632 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7368421053 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298690689769 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111899884541 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116083779091 0.0758088955206 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197881935521 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146614198188 0.0667264976115 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4 Out of 6
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