The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Each individual department or industry is directly or indirectly interlinked with one another. And day by day there is immense pressure and huge competition in each field, that could be in academics or corporate sector. Which ultimately results in workload and working under stress.
There should be smart work instead of working day and night. When the students are being taught a specific topic in school, they should also be taught to implement it in their work, that is the smart work. Each individual has its own strength but to flourish those, a appropriate platform should be provided to them at right time.
To succeed in a specific project a proper planning, strategies and teamwork makes it is easy to establish. When there are any changes done by our government it is not an individuals decision, it is a team work and further the results are seen. When India planned to launched a satellite called Chandrayan 2 in that case there was hard work and teamwork of the whole ISRO department and not an individuals work or decision. They made it happen only when the whole team cooperated with each other.
Usually our way of thinking or mindset is moulded at a young age therefore it is important that what type of education we are seeking and what changes it is making in our life. Leadership is a thing which students learn in their school/college life. It is a responsibility to manage a particular department and to cooperate with other individuals as well.
With this in mind our education system should be designed in such a manner that young youth should follow their passion but providing a guideline and moulding their minds in a way that there is less competition in between and they should be able to tackle a situation coordinating one another.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...its own strength but to flourish those, a appropriate platform should be provided...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 304.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88815789474 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78773530739 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519736842105 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5524121755 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0555677409108 0.243740707755 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0198907188638 0.0831039109588 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0208896665065 0.0758088955206 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0324926341641 0.150359130593 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203483769353 0.0667264976115 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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