The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Since there are many advantages for cooperation over competition t
Cooperation is a vital quality for leaders in government, and if not the most important but very essential for completing big projects, the projects that impacts regular people's life, successful. Building new hospitals, schools or recreational centers a leader need to coorperate with the supporting workers and companies responsible. It is important to understand local people's opinion to get the most of out it. To solve big issues like terrorism needs utmost cooperation with people working. The US president Obama achived success in catching notorious Bin Laden with the help of different government departments, including secret services, army and air force. The combined efforts lead to a successful mission.
Heart attack is most common cause of death in modern world. Doctors and researchers discuss the rise of axiety due competitive jobs is one of the big reason for that. Rat race to move ahead in the corporate chain is commonly seen. Most of the people spend more that 40 hours of their week at work which more than 1/2 of their awake time during weekdays. This rigourous competitive nature of the work is causing people to suffer from axiety, depression and serious health and mental diseases. Hence supplanting competition with cooperation in young generation of the society seems a viable and effective solution. It will improve the quality of the human life by reducing stress and other severe mental issues.
In medical industry, we have seen, to for a single surgery there are bunch of specialist come together and resolve the problem. For a single surgery aenestetic, surgeon, nurses and other staff is required to work in harmony to get the desired results. In cases where life and death is at the cost need tremendous amount of cooperation and support, rather than competion. Leaders are required to understand patient's needs and requirements, schedule the task working with the entire team. Service, diagnosis-Scan checks, surgery, everything is equaly important.
There are multiple benefits of cooperation over competition for several reasons such as govermental imporant issues resolving or in
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 347.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42363112392 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85581326888 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622478386167 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2458062159 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0526315789 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2631578947 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.42105263158 5.21951772744 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159208399733 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406761540853 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469775442024 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870082123312 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139064432454 0.0667264976115 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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