Claim: Even though young people often receive the advice to “follow your dreams,” more emphasis should be placed on picking worthy goals.
Reason: Many people’s dreams are inherently selfish.
Young people are source of powerful thoughts, pro activeness and bright future. If they given good bandwidth to embrace their dreams, it would be pretty much fruitful to entire generation of mankind. As history can be mirror to such a cite of examples in past, that in time of renaissance many author, intellectuals took their own path for freedom of their thoughts which eventually resulted in vast art size for us.
It is very well true that young should be advised at some of the intervals because they doesn't share the same experience as other elder people do. So it would kind gesture sporadic moment to guide and evaluate their thoughts and just guide them to proper dreams which they want to achieve. Sometime it big and difficult task to understand your dream and evaluate it. At what certain it is achievable, by analyzing it it gives basic construe of real picture. Is that achievable will query straight from shoulder. It will be obviate that person start working on the short term goals and than with course of time the can achieve long term goals.
Achieving dream is not the big problem but analyzing it and breaking it down into individual cluster that is important and critical thing, which can be taken from elder or older people. Once person is ready with handful thoughts. They can be penchant to work on milestones, which are each steps to success. Success sometime come easily and how you shape or interpret your success it key of excellence. People to be moved by thwarts, as they need source of guidance for the whole journey towards dream.
As mentioned in reason that "Many people's dream are inherently selfish", I don't agree with statement as stated in it really doesn't make sense to put barrier on every youngster to not pursue their dreams. It can be very well reason for author to come this conclusion or thought regarding people but it strange enough if take apply the same principle to every young being. If we properly help young people to analyse their goals and state down proper steps to achieve it would be very much helpful to them to understanding and achieving it, not by restricting the inventiveness and stimulating them towards some goal centered steps.
Evenly working on tinge steps will surely achieve their ambition which eventually is completion of goal. To how to make them understand and guide would be responsibility of older people not to restrict the thoughts to some goal centered approach. If we go with author approach of guiding young generation it will be lead to generation which will moving into some rigid predefined direction but same as old innovation and inventiveness will be lost somewhere by this.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'gave'?
Suggestion: gave
...o activeness and bright future. If they given good bandwidth to embrace their dreams,...
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Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...an be mirror to such a cite of examples in past, that in time of renaissance many autho...
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Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun author seems to be countable; consider using: 'many authors'.
Suggestion: many authors
...es in past, that in time of renaissance many author, intellectuals took their own path for ...
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Line 2, column 54, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ll true that young should be advised at some of the intervals because they doesnt share the...
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Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...d at some of the intervals because they doesnt share the same experience as other elde...
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Line 2, column 414, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
... certain it is achievable, by analyzing it it gives basic construe of real picture. I...
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Line 2, column 585, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...art working on the short term goals and than with course of time the can achieve lon...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...an be taken from elder or older people. Once person is ready with handful thoughts. ...
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Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keys'?
Suggestion: keys
... you shape or interpret your success it key of excellence. People to be moved by th...
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Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s dream are inherently selfish', I dont agree with statement as stated in it re...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e with statement as stated in it really doesnt make sense to put barrier on every youn...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'really', 'regarding', 'so', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217038539554 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.184584178499 0.157235817809 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103448275862 0.0880659088768 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0446247464503 0.0497285424764 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0831643002028 0.0444667217837 187% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.115618661258 0.12292977631 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0446247464503 0.0406280797675 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59213439724 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0466531440162 0.030933414821 151% => OK
Particles: 0.00405679513185 0.0016655270985 244% => OK
Determiners: 0.0385395537525 0.0997080785238 39% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0324543610548 0.0249443105267 130% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0202839756592 0.0148568991511 137% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2676.0 2732.02544248 98% => OK
No of words: 457.0 452.878318584 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85557986871 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328227571116 0.366273622748 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.242888402626 0.280924506359 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.17067833698 0.200843997647 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107221006565 0.132149295362 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59213439724 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 219.290929204 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520787746171 0.48968727796 106% => OK
Word variations: 60.5076460301 55.4138127331 109% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.85 23.380412469 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2237283527 59.4972553346 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.8 141.124799967 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.85 23.380412469 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.3 0.674092028746 45% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.21349557522 211% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.1388402626 51.4728631049 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.20779220779 1.64882698954 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203690403139 0.391690518653 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0998616510709 0.123202303941 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0581767671636 0.077325440228 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.492756549618 0.547984918172 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14135290608 0.149214159877 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748299205861 0.161403998019 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567256354583 0.0892212321368 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.352380369052 0.385218514788 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0639938324307 0.0692045440612 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134357306751 0.275328986314 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560231756544 0.0653680567796 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.4325221239 153% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 15.0 7.22455752212 208% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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