Claim: Even though young people often receive the advice to “follow your dreams,” more emphasis should be placed on picking worthy goals.
Reason: Many people’s dreams are inherently selfish.
The given claim insisting positively young people to follow their goals instead of following their dreams seems to be praiseworthy. Nonetheless the reason specified for the claim that many of the dreams are selfish seems to be contradictory in some way. Any such conclusion should be evaluated with examples of situation which depict such scenarios.
Dreams allow youth to explore more and more progress in their fields. Young generation today have reached their pinnacle in their field because of unrestricted scope in dreams. Nonetheless dreams allow adults to achieve their goals. The CEO of top most IT companies today have reached their position only due their capacity to dream. As rightly said by the CEO of Google Sundar Pichai "A person is influenced by his capacity of dreaming and Imagination should not have any limits". Nonetheless we cannot ignore the founder of Tesla Elon Musk. The capacity of individual to dream lead to invention of such a revolutionary model which is known as Tesla which people admire entirely over the globe today.
Nevertheless Goals can be consider as the limit an individual sets in order to achieve his target or mission. Certain hindrances might affect human achieving his goals but if an individual is firm in his opinion he should reach pinnacle. Moreover goals help people to break their own records. Vast industrial revolution, technological advancements, corporate progress, financial get throughs and development of country economy can be observed today as outcome of uncompromising goals. Dreams, on the other hand might not be intede for selfish motives. Considering the case of Google, It aims just to increase its revenue also helping its customer to take benefits of its free services like Google Maps and Drive storage space upto it specified limit. Moreover we cannot ignore completely the fact the Google doesn't have any selfish motives as it charges its customer heavily for exploring its service beyond certain limit of free trial usage.
Some organisation in work really follow their dreams without any inherent selfish motives like NGO's. Most of the NGO's in the rustic parts of african continent are striving hard today to free africa from poverty. Nevertheless we cannot blame such organisations and insist them to follow any kind of goals as thy are already following dreams as their aims meticulously.
The reason stated for above claim has an restricted scope. Nevertheless the instances depicted above clearly illustrate case in which above reason might be fallacious. Without evaluating those mentions case reaching to such an conclusion without any strong basis is cleary worthless.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Nonetheless,
... their dreams seems to be praiseworthy. Nonetheless the reason specified for the claim that...
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Suggestion: Nonetheless,
...ecause of unrestricted scope in dreams. Nonetheless dreams allow adults to achieve their go...
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Suggestion: Nonetheless,
...ation should not have any limits'. Nonetheless we cannot ignore the founder of Tesla E...
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Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...admire entirely over the globe today. Nevertheless Goals can be consider as the limit an i...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...n his opinion he should reach pinnacle. Moreover goals help people to break their own re...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
... storage space upto it specified limit. Moreover we cannot ignore completely the fact th...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...t ignore completely the fact the Google doesnt have any selfish motives as it charges ...
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Suggestion:
...inherent selfish motives like NGOs. Most of the NGOs in the rustic parts of afric...
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Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...hard today to free africa from poverty. Nevertheless we cannot blame such organisations and ...
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Suggestion: a
... The reason stated for above claim has an restricted scope. Nevertheless the inst...
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Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...or above claim has an restricted scope. Nevertheless the instances depicted above clearly il...
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...ng those mentions case reaching to such an conclusion without any strong basis is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, really, so, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2245.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29481132075 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75359303609 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5663897657 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.045454545 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203737851567 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613874888201 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524768532047 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113544962421 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625375951924 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.