People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
The statement linking decision making of people with their emotion seems to be praiseworthy. Nevertheless an detailed analysis should be executed before carefully evaluating the pros and cons of such incorporating such an theme must be evaluated before reaching out to such an conclusion.
People sometimes make hasty decisions and in some of the rare cases such an decisions are even found to be fruitful. Consider the case of an sportsman like an cricketer or an footballer who have to make split second decisions in order to execute their goal. Nevertheless failure to execute their initial goal and later explaining them with logic won't be fruitful to such individuals. Moreover making decisions based upon emotion can even lead to an biased opinion as some of the poor member of the society might get an advantage who really don't deserve having such an advantage. Moreover poor decision makers can not be evaluated on the basis of their decision making skill. However they should be evaluated on the basis of how successful those person are based upon those decisions. Consider the case of an pilot who has to go through an intensive training before flying an private flight and who has to change his decisions randomly based upon environmental conditions. Nonetheless if he makes decisions based upon emotion he might risk lives of many innocent individuals. Despite making decisions which are not based upon any emotion we cannot classify the pilots as an strong or poor decision makers.
Some people might also make certain decisions which are influenced by emotion. For example consider the case of Japan which had devastating effect after the attacks of Hiroshima and Nagasaki during the world war. Nonetheless the government made decisions which helped the people to fight to such an abstruse situation. Today Japan has made such an progress after the downfall that hardly any person could recognise that this place was once burning in flames. Moreover the japanese government cannot be disregarded for poor decision making but actually they were strong decision maker which helped the economy of the country to grow and flourish. Furthermore there are certain people would have sacrificed their lives for the freedom of their country. Considering the case of an great Indian freedom fighter Mahatma Gandhi also known as Father of India. Gandhi was known for his strict rules and austere principle and he also helped the indian who were suffering emotionally from the british rule. Gandhi ensured that his principle will eventually eradicate the british rule and help Indians emotionally which made him one of the greatest leader.
The definition of poor decision makers is limited. One cannot judge people based upon their ability to make decisions based upon emotions as an poor decision maker. Moreover if the decision of an individual benefits the society no matter it might be based on emotion those are actually one of the strong decision makers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, really, second, so, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2487.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 483.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14906832298 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58870880335 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467908902692 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 809.1 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1393431936 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.130434783 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30434782609 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 7.80617977528 448% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424929552911 0.243740707755 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165005796492 0.0831039109588 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128477949856 0.0758088955206 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301494801791 0.150359130593 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154693348245 0.0667264976115 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.