Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Cities plays a major role as they represent the State to the world. So it is important that we take care of the cities. Maintaining the cities is not a free factor, so i mostly agree that financial support must be provided for them to thrive.
As being a major city influences many kinds of people to come and visit the places around them, tourism can be implemented. With proper allocating of finance, we can preserve the old monuments, buildings, temples, lakes which show our culture and history. Money invested in tourism will return as profit to the city. Mainly this promotes our city and history.
Metropolitan cities are called major cities as their infrastructure is awesome and connectivity to other cities is well established. Hence, proper road facilities are important. Well structured city plan like garden and along with buildings also need to be taken care. As major cities invite many diverse cultures from rural areas, diversity need to be maintained. Like in India, it as Temples for Hindus, Mosques for Muslims, Gurudhwara for Sikhs and many more. This will spread positiveness across all the people.
Rural areas do need the financial support for primary purposes.
Thus majors need lots of financial support in order to maintain diversity, tourism and foreign relations. But at the same time rural areas are also need to be taken care for the primary things like food, health and shelter.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'influence'?
Suggestion: influence
...m to thrive. As being a major city influences many kinds of people to come and visit ...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding places'?
Suggestion: the surrounding places
... many kinds of people to come and visit the places around them, tourism can be implemented. With prope...
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Line 17, column 149, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'needed'.
Suggestion: needed
...t at the same time rural areas are also need to be taken care for the primary things...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 236.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06355932203 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59453204335 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601694915254 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6019555368 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.6875 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 23.4991977007 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247868316357 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784531103436 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685606711082 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136657804895 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362475841078 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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