Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation’s cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
It is said that cities must be supported financially by the governments in order to thrive, and the first aim of such economic support is to preserve and generate the nation’s cultural traditions.
Economic progression is the most important issue in each country. It is used to measure the success of a country. If a country has a stable economic situation, it will be able to provide all needs. Economic growth is a fundamental goal for countries. A healthy economy results in job creation, a high level of employment and providing necessary public services. In addition to this, a country with a good economic situation will be able to preserve or generate its cultural traditions as holding such traditions needs enough budget. Governments have this responsibility to divide equally the nation's budget into different cities because each city has its own needs and cultural traditions. For example, my country Iran has more than one hundred cities and each city has its rural areas and each one has its own needs. The city that I live in is Isfahan. This city is known for its historical places and traditions. It needs annual financial support for preserving its traditions and historical buildings. This budget should be provided by officials in government centers. This city is a popular tourist destination in my country and in order to thrive, it needs to be supported financially each year based on the specific budget. Otherwise, the council of the city will not be able to repair the historical buildings or preserve and hold the cultural traditions in this city.
Eventually, a part of each country’s economic growth is to preserve its cultural traditions. Half the budget of each country is devoted to this subject because, in this way, the country will be able to introduce itself to other countries. A part of the economic growth and identity of each country is introduced by its traditions. Therefore, one of the primaries of each nation should be the preservation and generation of its cultural traditions. This aim should be done alongside other main aims.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, therefore, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04335260116 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93272149337 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433526011561 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2319153832 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.25 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244554694463 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903440148203 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102026434084 0.0758088955206 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231461927195 0.150359130593 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138928878641 0.0667264976115 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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