Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.
Reason: People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Whatever a person achieve in life and who he becomes is a culmination of both his experiences and imagination.Without imagination he couldn't aspire to reach where he is and without experience he wouldn't have the defined path leading towards his goal.The stated prompt says that imagination is a more valueable asset cause lack of experience frees their imagination of constarints of habits and attitudes. I however, consider both Imagination and experience to be of equal value due to the following reasons.
It is true,in every field imagination is the first step. Wether it is a person's personal goal or invention of a machine, nothing would have been possible without imagining it first.For instance, if Jeff Bezos wouldn't have the courage to imagine a world where people are able to buy stuff from the internet without going to the market, the world wouldn't have Amazon (world's largest e-commerce website).On the other hand, If Mahatma Gandhi wouldn't have dreamed about India being free, then the country wouldn't have achieved independce in 1947.However, in both of these above examples, only imagining about it wasn't enough.It was due to their prior experiences and mistakes were they able to achieve their goal.Imagination layed the foundation but the experiences that hepled in building that imagination.
Also,Imaginations gives one false hopes and aspiration as imagination has no bound but experiences helps in keeping in check with reality. Hence, Imagination and experience goes hand in hand.One is incomplete without the other.All the marvels and creation the world has seen and is yet to see are all amalgamation of dreams and experiences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, then, for instance, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 263.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30418250951 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10787603275 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600760456274 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 23.0359550562 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 237.212750266 60.3974514979 393% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 232.5 118.986275619 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.8333333333 23.4991977007 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1666666667 5.21951772744 291% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245585507597 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126909303809 0.0831039109588 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519025299949 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177778971495 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480845657697 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.4 14.1392134831 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 48.8420337079 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 12.1743820225 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.2143820225 171% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.