Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.
Reason: People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes.
The claim that imagination is more valuable asset compared to experience, is weak one on many grounds. I believe that there needs to be substantial overlap between experience and creativity, to find novel avenues.We need to not only coordinate with newer and creative people, but also make them experienced at the work, so that they can comprehend the underlying contraints better and still find breakthroughs. If we can achieve this synergy, then it will drive up efficiencies of corporations and propel us to a much more modern society than we are today.
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Sentence: I believe that there needs to be substantial overlap between experience and creativity, to find novel avenues.We need to not only coordinate with newer and creative people, but also make them experienced at the work, so that they can comprehend the underlying contraints better and still find breakthroughs.
Error: contraints Suggestion: constraints
Sentence: And even in cases where imagination works, it helps a great deal if it is backed by experience of yester years.
Error: yester Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Any deviation from normal, not only involves a fair bit of resource expenditure, but because so many different components are simultaneously involved, only an experienced person can be in a position to take imaginitive routes to work wherein every bad scenario is fairly well understood.
Error: imaginitive Suggestion: imaginative
Sentence: Additionally, in line with the argument if corporations start hiring people solely on the basis of their creative prowess, they wwill have to expend a lot of time and money to train its employees to the ways of the industry.
Error: wwill Suggestion: will
Sentence: An experienced person however, if not too creative will still be able to contribute to the corporation soley by sticking to the status quo without the need to 'reinvent the wheel' and also very efficiently.
Error: soley Suggestion: solely
Sentence: The statistician could betterunderstand the correlations between factors such as Child mortality rates and GDP of nations and compare them wiht ways previously not possible.
Error: betterunderstand Suggestion: better understand
Error: wiht Suggestion: with
Sentence: In conlcusion, yes creative spirit helps in identifying newer avenues to the complex world we have.
Error: conlcusion Suggestion: conclusion
Sentence: These ideas may in most cases only lead to drop in efficienies and delay the execution of our plans.
Error: efficienies Suggestion: efficiencies
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