Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.
Reason: People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes.
The Author of the issue claims that Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience. The writer further reasons that people who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes. In what follows, I will first discuss my response to the claim and then explain what I think of the reason on which the claim is based.
I fundamentally agree with the claim that imagination is a more precious asset than experience. Among countless reasons which can support my opinion, I will delve into the most conspicuous ones. First of all, one should take into account this significant fact that many of experiences have adverse consequences. In fact, a large number of experiences are accompanied by loss. In other words, when people want to experience something and do not imagine what may happen as a result of this experience, maybe encounter losing money, reputation, health and so forth. On the other hands, some of these losses are irreparable. Therefore, it is advisable that people first imagine what may happen and evaluate all unpredicted aspects and outcomes of that particular experience and if they find out that they will not face difficulties and loss, they can take action and experience.
Another equally notable point justifying my opinion is that lots of experiences have so many benefits. As a matter of fact, sometimes it is really valuable and advantageous for us to experience somethings, but at first we do not know what we can gain through that experience. Indeed, almost all people are trepid in relation to take risks and experience particular thing. Thus, this trepidation and fear will prevent them to do action. Consequently, they will not take advantage of the results of that experience, but if they utilize their imagination, they will accept to do action.
Nevertheless, as far as the reason is concerned, I do not agree with the author of the issue to some extent. That is, from my point of view, people should consider constraints of established habits and attitudes when they imagine to do something. According to the noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistics released by recent research conducted in our country more than half of the people who use their imagination without considering constraints of established habits and attitudes when they imagine to do something will lose, so in this way their imagination will not be helpful and beneficial.
To wrap it up, all aforementioned arguments lead us to the conclusion that imagination is a more valuable asset than experience, but that was the story in a nutshell. Actually, there are some other reasons and examples challenging the claim which are not mentioned above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, then, therefore, thus, i think, in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2290.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 446.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13452914798 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97614301668 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466367713004 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.0 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6004919807 60.3974514979 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.65 5.21951772744 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.47244606354 0.243740707755 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143937445552 0.0831039109588 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160310431483 0.0758088955206 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302831835511 0.150359130593 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.203321279537 0.0667264976115 305% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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