Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The claim and the reason primarily deals with the common prevailing problem of modern society. That is, many problems of modern society could not be addressed since people's hearts and minds could not be changed by the enforcement of laws and orders. As the auhtor suggests "many problems of modern society" in the claim, it can be inferred that some problems of modern society can be addressed through law adn orders.
The claim being construed with this view, it can presummed that there exists problems in society which depends on people's mindset and can be controlled by laws. For example, miscreant who is involved killing someone due to vegance or robbing from someone, is subjected to the punishment of their unlawful act according to their government rules. Hence, it can be assumed that imposing punishment on miscreant could cause a change in state of mind of people.
However, there are scenarios where even the punishment couldn't solve the modern society problems. For instance, increasing rate of molestation and rape scenes in India. Even with the increased severity of punishments, these unlawful and anti-social activities cannot be scotched invalidating the possibility that people's hearts and minds can be changed by laws and orders.
In addition to this, society problems does not encompasses generic problems like killing, robbing or misbehaving but also other problems such as, disputes among people and misunderstanding among neighbors and other misaligned emotional traits. Since, society is formed by group of people of different cultures, languages and varying cultural and moral values, it is difficult for the government to enforce law unbiased.
Moreover, every individual of the society might follow their own unjust laws which may be perfectly working for them whilst not the same for others. Furthermore, there are certain scenarios which includes environmental changes and the effects of those changes on people's mind. An example is, there might be a severe drought in the area or city which posits a change of mind among people to immigrate from the place. These uncertain decisions of people cannot be controlled by the laws and orders.
At last, though certain circumstances exists where law can impose change in people's minds and hearts, there are numerous situations where it is impossible to do so. Thus, apart from acting in accordance with law, collaboration and understanding is vital for a society-free problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...ts problems in society which depends on peoples mindset and can be controlled by laws. ...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...are scenarios where even the punishment couldnt solve the modern society problems. For ...
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Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encompass'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: encompass
...tion to this, society problems does not encompasses generic problems like killing, robbing ...
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Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'encompass'
Suggestion: encompass
...tion to this, society problems does not encompasses generic problems like killing, robbing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2088.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 391.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34015345269 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.806797882 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516624040921 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8040717379 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.823529412 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343520055094 0.243740707755 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117569307693 0.0831039109588 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740299307037 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178429164437 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803541760093 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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