Claim: In order to help small businesses thrive, government should play a minimal role in private business matters.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The statement aims for rapid improvement of small scaled businesses subjected to the minimum interference from the government. Business forms the core of economy of all parts of the world and developments of a region starts how well the business capital performs. But initiation of any business, be it large or small, requires its opening balance i.e. accumulation of funds which creates impediments for small businesses with limited funds. Sometimes people with great business concepts often find a roadblock in starting their business due to lack of funds. Above all, the biggest obstacle in the growing development of business stands from Government in the form pf compliances. Even people with the least marginal profit ratio often gets forced to shut down their ventures by due pressure from the government in regulation of their set standard codes of compliances. Many business economy would have boomed with a flexible approach of Government towards the stepping stones for this small traders.
Many statutory bodies opines that government should stand as a canopy to protect all by surveillance on any kind of products or services open to the public at large. Be it things or services or people like vegetables, clothes, schools, work stations, transports housing tax , income tax all falls under control of domain from government so that they can prevent any illegal or immoral activity incurred. But all positive effects accompany its negative implications on others. Such strict vigilance by government poses difficulties for small traders, businessman, investors who toils to manage regulations within limited time frames along with managing starting difficulties faced by new business concepts.
Big tech giants like Google, Apple, IBM often recruits third party agencies to stay back from this complicated government policies and compliances. They tend to maintain it through other independent bodies so that they can prevent themselves form any direct accusations for non-compliances arising thereto. Even small farmers in different countries of India, United States, UK are ceasing their farming practices with the taxation and governments control on their mass produce. Sometimes it is growing hard for the farmers to survive with below the cost profit ratio. Agriculture approximately contributes 55% of economy and is the basis for livelihood and with the growing resistance from government, the small businesses by the farmers are hugely affected.
Small trades and businesses needs a free hand from the Government to explore its very first steps. Government could surely lay some compliances but that shall be helpful if it is subjected to the magnitude of the business expansion, as the big business giants manages to face its complexities, the small traders often capitulate with this growing pressure from government time to time. Thus flourishment of economy can be accelerated with more encouragement and minimum complications from government to small and localized businesses.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'opine'.
Suggestion: opine
...small traders. Many statutory bodies opines that government should stand as a canop...
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Suggestion:
... Be it things or services or people like vegetables, clothes, schools, work stati...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s, work stations, transports housing tax , income tax all falls under control of d...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... pressure from government time to time. Thus flourishment of economy can be accelera...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ment to small and localized businesses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, third, thus, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2557.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 463.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52267818575 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93004467948 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561555075594 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 778.5 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1838853933 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.578947368 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3684210526 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42105263158 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208343774751 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073199885255 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442350346282 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135549625222 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573771176392 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.