Claim: People who say they are bored should look inward rather than blaming the circumstances in which they find themselves.
Reason: Boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self-motivation.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
There are an exorbitant quantity of factors involved to pinpoint the exact causes of insipidity. But I believe it differs by person. What regales one person may exasperate another. Boredom can be engendered by one's own deportment if one sanctions it. Insipidity, in my opinion, is caused by a lack of ingeniousness and motivation.
One of the best strategies to beat boredom is to take care of yourself. You won't grow bored if you don't rely on people to make you jubilant. When a person's bliss is dependent on a single companion, their loss can be devastating. It's simple to inculpate others for your ennui, but that's not indispensable. It is feasible to relish a favourite pastime alone. Customarily, the person ends up appreciating it more than expected!
Insipidity is believed to occur when you are unable to interact with individuals you trust and when the odds are not in your favour. Insipidity is possible in company. This is something I've personally experienced when I don't fit in. To ken oneself, one must examine one's own sentiments and priorities. My sister is a sanguine, and sanguine don't get bored facilely. Her peers ignored her in college because they cerebrated she was an introvert. It perturbed her and made her boring school for most of her time there. Why did her friends ignore her as a teen when she discovered she relished music? She had found a way to deal with vapidity by doing something she relished. It's all about finding something you relish to do to beat insipidit
Another argument is the influence of others on a person's cerebrating. Even innovative, proactive, and self-discipline. People might be abstained by their own noetic conceptions. Because there are so many books on the same subject and genre, an inscriber may be as per the rule authorised to cease boredom. This will ravage the person's self-esteem and zeal to compose a best-selling book.
Physical dormancy can engender ennui since the dormant person believes he is salubrious and doesn't require to exercise. Those who are more active, hence more ingenious and productive, are a higher cause of ignominious. For example, playing FIFA on a computer cannot be compared to genuinely playing FIFA on the ground. Because he is self gainsaying and comfortable with himself, even if he is bored.
In conclusion,there are sundry reasons why someone could feel abashed by their jejunity. As optically discerned above, several circumstances can dampen a person's exuberance and motivation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...can be engendered by ones own deportment if one sanctions it. Insipidity, in my o...
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...of yourself. You wont grow bored if you dont rely on people to make you jubilant. Wh...
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... on people to make you jubilant. When a persons bliss is dependent on a single companio...
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...to inculpate others for your ennui, but thats not indispensable. It is feasible to re...
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... possible in company. This is something Ive personally experienced when I dont fit ...
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...thing Ive personally experienced when I dont fit in. To ken oneself, one must examin...
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...introvert. It perturbed her and made her boring school for most of her time there...
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...pidity by doing something she relished. Its all about finding something you relish ...
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...nt person believes he is salubrious and doesnt require to exercise. Those who are more...
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...ove, several circumstances can dampen a persons exuberance and motivation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2087.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07785888078 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01331691885 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593673965937 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3557424675 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.5666666667 118.986275619 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.7 23.4991977007 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104872267969 0.243740707755 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234915479351 0.0831039109588 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036369248676 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.049568673692 0.150359130593 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309991574196 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 48.8420337079 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.