Claim: Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's major field of study. Reason: Acquiring knowledge of various academic disciplines is the best way to become truly educated.
Stating that universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's major field of study, this view asserts that true education recommend to experience various field of study. In some sense, it is true that knowing field which is outside from one's major could be helpful for true learning. In my point of view, however, considering that modern scholars have been and will be more complex following development of technology or more detail in a field and wasted time while a person learn other field which would not be helpful to his career, it is proper to study one's own field.
Of course, few would disagree that comprehensive learning is more advantageous. Considering that many corporations prefer certain candidates who have skills or knowledge in many field as possible as they can, it is desirable for students to accumulate diverse knowledge of many fields of study. For example, one of retired board of directors of global corporation, Samsung, say that their personnel team are recommended to hire people who have diverse experience in many fields, no matter what the experience is in workplaces or in school. It is desirable to recommend to have diverse contact with many fields of study.
However, can we always say that combining many fields is advantageous??? My answer is no. Considering that most of fields have been more and more specified because of development of technologies and accumulated achievement of a filed during the human history, it looks almost impossible to learn only a field properly. For example, there are many minute field in biology, such as taxonomy, genetics, molecular biology, evolutionary biology etc.. And each minor field have been developed by many scholars and development of technology which can be applied usefully in each field have invented and are being invented. Because of these increased complexity, competent students cannot learn other minor field, although they all can be called as 'biology. Then, how about totally different field?
Moreover, considering that, many students can learn many fields when they are undergraduate students, they have little time to many fields. Also, because they have to enroll proper credit to graduate in their major, absolute time to use decrease. That can lead students to be distant from their major which can be actually helpful to their career in the future So, It is hard to say that students have to learn many fields
To summarize, many people would agree that other fields which are unrelated to one's major will be complementary to a filed's disadvantageous. However, when it comes to that many fields are more specified and complex and that all students have only limited time in university, it is proper for students to focus on only their major. Only foolish people would claims that university have to make policy about forcing to enroll classes which are outside one's major
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun field seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fields'.
Suggestion: many fields
...didates who have skills or knowledge in many field as possible as they can, it is desirabl...
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Line 3, column 560, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend having'.
Suggestion: recommend having
...places or in school. It is desirable to recommend to have diverse contact with many fields of stu...
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Line 6, column 108, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the fields') or simply say ''most fields''.
Suggestion: most of the fields; most fields
...us??? My answer is no. Considering that most of fields have been more and more specified becau...
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Line 6, column 355, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'fields'?
Suggestion: fields
...rly. For example, there are many minute field in biology, such as taxonomy, genetics,...
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Line 6, column 444, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...ecular biology, evolutionary biology etc.. And each minor field have been develope...
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Line 10, column 358, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'claim'
Suggestion: claim
... their major. Only foolish people would claims that university have to make policy abo...
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Line 10, column 415, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enrolling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: enrolling
...rsity have to make policy about forcing to enroll classes which are outside ones major
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, while, for example, of course, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.3162921348 230% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2451.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 478.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12761506276 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72180556272 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456066945607 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 778.5 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.5227725399 60.3974514979 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1578947368 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52631578947 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201682400839 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076447869391 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996253363383 0.0758088955206 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134543583477 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677858532709 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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