People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Stating that people should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences, this view asserts that deeply taking consideration need to do risky action. In some sense, it is true that do anything without long time of thinking may bad result. In my point of view, however, considering that there are many historical examples show that rashly doing something resulted in very good results and that great result without any plan or intention.
Of course, few would disagree that we need to think many conditions, results which may come from action and chance of cost before doing and that will lead to consistent results. When it comes to business world, many C.E.Os analyze all kind of things which came from opening new business. For example, founder of Samsung, Beong-Cheol Lee considered state of world economy and flow of engineering and promising technologies and heard many advice from many experts from his own think-tank and from outer experts before founding Samsung Electronics Inc.. Considering that we may be better to have habit which predict future atmosphere.
However, can we always say that careful behavior is advantageous? My answer is no. Considering that many historically famous people who run for his purpose without thinking results and possibility of success and risks. it may be bad to consider many things. For example, Napoleon, the great general, made a strategy which is that attacking enemies by climbing the highest mountain in Europe, the Alphs. His man said the strategy is impossible and some said he was mad, but Napoleon force for his troops to follow him and he succeeded and he is considered as one of the greatest general of human history. It may be better to run for purpose without considering any other condition
Moreover, considering that many great achievement in science history which came from an intentional experiment, it may helpful for science to do first. For example, Pastoir discarded a kind of fungi which look blue and germs in same case. Few days later, he found that germs had been almost gone. And he did research about 'the blue fungi' and he found the first antibiotic medicine of human history, This indicates that unintentional behavior can make great achievements.
To summarize, many people agree that action without any plan will lead people to failures. However, considering that many historical examples which show that people who rushed to goals without seeing periphery and people who drew out great achievement without any intentional behavior or plan, it may be disadvantageous deeply thinking before action in some cases. Only foolish people who ignores the possibility of these cases would claims that through plan is necessary and sufficient condition of success
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, look, may, moreover, so, for example, kind of, of course, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 31.0 11.3162921348 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2331.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 449.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19153674833 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6941687669 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518930957684 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 716.4 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7232702824 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.55 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.45 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223623278615 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709932499966 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146178624281 0.0758088955206 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130567553785 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124192973521 0.0667264976115 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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