College and university education should be free for all students fully financed by the government

Essay topics:

College and university education should be free for all students, fully financed by the government

Education is a primary right of every person.Everyone should enjoy the benefits of education and there should not be any barriers that should stop them from getting education.

College and university education are very important for shaping the future of a person.But, due to the inflated college and university program fees , many students, though adroit, are not able to enroll themselves in college. College education has started to become a privilege that can be enjoyed only by the rich. Many students are taking loans of huge amount to pay off their college fees. This only creates a huge burden on the students and they become more concentrated on the courses that can fetch them quick and huge money rather than the courses they are interested in.

On the other hands, most of the college funds come from the students tuition fees.The college funds are necessary for maintenance of the college and paying off faculty's salary, the administration cost of college and other things. It is very difficult for a college to be fully financed by the government.The yearly cost of the college is very high and fully funding of college by government could also lead to the increase in taxes which will also effects the general population.

As a measure, the college can provide full fee fees concession to the students who belong to the financially weaker section of society and fees of those students can be paid by the government. Students can also be provided scholarships depending upon their caliber. On campus jobs like teaching assistant or graduate assistant should be generated that can help the student in paying off his expenses during the college.The above mentioned measures can help the students who are in need for money to pay off their college fees.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Everyone
...tion is a primary right of every person.Everyone should enjoy the benefits of education ...
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...tant for shaping the future of a person.But, due to the inflated college and univer...
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...ated college and university program fees , many students, though adroit, are not a...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
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...most of the college funds come from the students tuition fees.The college funds are nece...
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...nds come from the students tuition fees.The college funds are necessary for mainten...
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... to be fully financed by the government.The yearly cost of the college is very high...
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...ing off his expenses during the college.The above mentioned measures can help the s...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266025641026 0.240241500013 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.147435897436 0.157235817809 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0865384615385 0.0880659088768 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0512820512821 0.0497285424764 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0320512820513 0.0444667217837 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121794871795 0.12292977631 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0448717948718 0.0406280797675 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68839965321 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0288461538462 0.030933414821 93% => OK
Particles: 0.0128205128205 0.0016655270985 770% => OK
Determiners: 0.105769230769 0.0997080785238 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0416666666667 0.0249443105267 167% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0192307692308 0.0148568991511 129% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1773.0 2732.02544248 65% => OK
No of words: 296.0 452.878318584 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98986486486 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.58838876751 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.364864864865 0.366273622748 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.293918918919 0.280924506359 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182432432432 0.200843997647 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108108108108 0.132149295362 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68839965321 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 219.290929204 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516891891892 0.48968727796 106% => OK
Word variations: 51.859887184 55.4138127331 94% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6194690265 48% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 29.6 23.380412469 127% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0526266943 59.4972553346 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.3 141.124799967 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 23.380412469 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 58.9918918919 51.4728631049 115% => OK
Elegance: 1.875 1.64882698954 114% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443113252932 0.391690518653 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.166923423133 0.123202303941 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0798146840549 0.077325440228 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.677489577625 0.547984918172 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.202553319235 0.149214159877 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206423083584 0.161403998019 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841821183747 0.0892212321368 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.381277267253 0.385218514788 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.149448322258 0.0692045440612 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295648793172 0.275328986314 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528838902151 0.0653680567796 81% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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