College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position
Student life is the period of learning and getting yourself prepared for the future. The prompt argues about the issue and claims that students should choose their major on the availability jobs in the field. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the prompt for two reasons which I will outline below. However, I do think that some people may argue against it.
First of all, students shouldn't choose their field of study based on job because job field is always changing. The fields which were highly on demand today may not stay in demand in coming days. For instance, Nuclear Engineering was a lucrative profession in the late 80's and 90's. There were many people at that time who choose Nuclear Engineering because of the availability of lucrative job. However, The recent Nuclear incidents in many parts of the world caused a significant decline in the use of Nuclear power. As a result job of the nuclear sector is declining. The person who had chosen his major based on only the availability of job may have to face serious problem now.
Secondly, students should not choose their major field based on availability of job cause job is not an indicator of happiness in life. For instance, If we think about a student who wanted to study engineering but because of the less ability of job in engineering profession in his country has chosen Medical profession. He might be doing a job but he is less likely to be happy. Whenever he is lying in is bed he may look at his phone and think about his dream of studying engineering. This problem is not going to allow him to concentrate on his medical profession too. He will not be a happy person in life.
Admittedly, someone may argue that in today's competitive world it is very important to have a good job to survive. However, if a person is passionate above, are we telling that if he follows his dream and passion he will be jobless?. For instance, if we think about Sachin Tendulkar who is the greatest cricketer of world cricket, from his childhood he wanted to be a cricketer. Some people argued that if he does so he may not be successful and may have struggle in the whole life. He did not pay heed to them and followed his dream, and he became the greatest cricketer of all time.
To conclude, College students should not choose their major on the available scope of job because job market is ever changing and job is not the indication of happiness. Following their dream may make them more successful
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nt decline in the use of Nuclear power. As a result job of the nuclear sector is d...
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...vive. However, if a person is passionate above, are we telling that if he follows...
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...o he may not be successful and may have struggle in the whole life. He did not pay heed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 440.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63181818182 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56195544506 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447727272727 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.432814946 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.9166666667 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200622276131 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656043790082 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075952584523 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134291704151 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553708391355 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.1392134831 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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