Essay topics:
Some people believe it is imperative for individuals living in developed nations to reduce their energy consumption and lead a more sustainable lifestyle, given the evidence for global climate change. Others believe that such drastic lifestyle changes are unwarranted, based on the existing evidence for global climate change.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The globe refers to the Earth and everything in it from the land, sea, ocean, air as well and life. If humans will continue to live on earth for a long time, from generations to generations, the Earth has to remain habitable. However, with the emissions from cars, generators, industries seeping into our environment, this has a negative effect on the Earth in terms of adulterating the air we breathe, and the water we drink or utilize.
Advocates for environmental sustainability are promoting the careful and efficient use of resources that could affect the climate and the environment at large. This can be seen in the celebration of World Water Day where humans are reminded to use water more efficiently, avoid oil spillage into water bodies that can affect living things habiting there and also to create awareness on the healthy ways to consume water to promote sustainability. Also, use of plastic bags is being prohibited in some countries as plastic is known not to easily decompose hence causes a nuisance to the environment. Others advocate for recycling of plastics instead of continuous production.
In the same vein, just as use of plastic and water are being controlled, so is the energy consumption in our environment. This can be seen through the cars we drive, the generators, the light consumption, that produces carbon mono oxide in the process of their utilization, which is known to adulterate the air we breathe in as living things as well as other living things on Earth. Imagine an environment where everyone uses all the aforementioned ways of energy consumption. That will put a whole lot of pressure on the air, thereby adulterating it at a faster rate. This kind of environment is seen mostly in developed countries where technology has progressed further than other countries and people are more inclined to drive cars, more industries are built leading to more energy consumption.
While others may claim that Global change will occur whether or not adjustments are made to one’s lifestyle, and argue that even in 10000 years to come the Earth will still remain habitable to a great extent, they failed to take into account that rising importance of technology in our everyday live and how this will affect the Earth at a faster rate than it did centuries ago when there was little or no use for energy.
Hence, it is important that the survival of the Earth depends on the way we use the resources in it effectively and efficiently. Even if it means a drastic change in the way we live our lives. In the end, it is all for a greater good of ensuring a sustainable and healthy environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 494, Rule ID: WHOLE_LOT[1]
Message: Use simply 'lot'.
Suggestion: lot
... of energy consumption. That will put a whole lot of pressure on the air, thereby adulter...
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Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...may claim that Global change will occur whether or not adjustments are made to one’s lifestyle...
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Line 9, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rces in it effectively and efficiently. Even if it means a drastic change in the way we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, so, still, well, while, as to, kind of, as well as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2190.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 449.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87750556793 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85785418088 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494432071269 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.7078030035 60.3974514979 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.875 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0625 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146044524864 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520925217347 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420917347005 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812847727578 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302961833588 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.