Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
Laws are made for people in a country or society to maintain certain types of goals but laws itself should be just and proper. We can not imagine a society without laws and regulations. Infect laws are everywhere in our society from bottom to top. Law enforcement departments and legislatures establish, alter and create laws where every law should be maintain and follow the rules. But it is a tragic truth that sometimes dictator type rulers create laws or changes the established laws just to support or hide their artfulness or grafts, perhaps those one sided laws are pernicious for the people of a country or state. So from my perspective I think that the above statement is true.
Society is a big community consists of its people where individuals right and thoughts are valued equally but sometimes partisan laws and regulations create great havoc. As for example, there should be laws for committing corruption and graft, but if a dictator changes this law and lessens the punishment of this activity thinking about his own people then it will create a massive corruption problem for the country. Every people should be responsible for those kind of unjust activity and it would be the people's duty to raise voice against those laws.
Moreover, people must follow logical and just laws like wearing a helmet and safety kits while riding. Those just law must be followed by every individuals otherwise this law will fail to fulfill its goal. Social disease like corruption, unjust, robbery, drug addict and reckless driving etc everything occurs from ignoring the established laws and have the proper insight to follow them. There will be hard and fast rules and punishments for not maintaining the rules.
In sum, considering all those situations and outcomes and ruminating past events it can be conclude that it is the responsibility for all of us to follow the just rules and strive against the unjust one.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 353, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maintained'?
Suggestion: maintained
...d create laws where every law should be maintain and follow the rules. But it is a tragi...
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Line 4, column 459, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
... Every people should be responsible for those kind of unjust activity and it would be the ...
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Line 4, column 509, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
... of unjust activity and it would be the peoples duty to raise voice against those laws....
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Line 10, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ules and strive against the unjust one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, then, while, as for, for example, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 323.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9907120743 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61197212358 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5785958705 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.142857143 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273003593659 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10605152369 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593272854727 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165657783278 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441524963483 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.