Learning is primarily a matter of personal discipline; students cannot be motivated by school or college alone.
learning is a process of acquiring knowledge from different sources and materials, while everybody's learning process is completely different and a bit of complex issue to describe properly. As human brains are very complex and interesting enough to keep the learning process still a kind of secret. From my perspective learning is the subject of personal discipline rather than school, college, mentor's motivation. However, one might find oneself comfortable when supervised by schools or colleges in case of learning. Most of the cases a true learner will definitely acquire knowledge, a good mentor or guidance from schools will not hinder him.
Students, those have potential and a thirst for learning, lack of proper guidance may make their path rude but not make impossible. Moreover, genuine talent or enthusiasm can only be developed by oneself through searching and learning from everywhere. In the modern era of technology internet and smart devices are pervasive, oneself just need a little push to know the things that are ruminating in their head. If learners are still lassitude to know after having all those devices and Google, his interest in learning may be questioned. In sum, looking back in past clears the fact that those who were extraordinary in some fields have a strong desire for discovering the unknown.
For example, everyone should have heard the name of Rabindra Nath Tagore, who did not attend school due to lack of interest but acquire a vast knowledge of Bengali and English literature by self-studying. He was also awarded Nobel prize mostly for 'Gitanjali' a collection of poems. History always shows us that, absolute interest in learning can never be stopped due to lack of supervising. In the case of, Sir Issac Newton, who first invented gravity, was actually a free thinker or self-learner, who questioned a very conventional reality, why the apple fall downward instead of upward?
and this question leads him to discover the universal truth 'The Gravity'.
However, some students find it really difficult to learn by himself/herself, necessarily mean that he/she is blockheaded. Sometimes, students need just a little push or showing them the way of learning, like showing the first couple of steps in the ocean of knowledge.
In a nutshell, schools and colleges are really helpful in terms of motivation, direction, guidelines but oneself needs to learn on his own. So, I agree with the issue that 'Learning is a matter of personal discipline'.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... apple fall downward instead of upward? and this question leads him to discover ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, still, thus, while, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2098.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20595533499 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86259451408 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593052109181 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1628146437 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.421052632 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2105263158 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200207397553 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609968481952 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642957285515 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995576160577 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860058359417 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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