Mass media and the internet have caused people’s attention spans to get shorter. However, the overall effect has been positive: while people are less able to focus on one thing, they more than make up for it with an enhanced ability to sort through large quantities of information and find what’s important.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Everyday we find lots of news in internet and media. The news cover through current political issue to ancient kings battles.
It is true that people find themselves easy to pick up and read the news they want to know with the help of modern day 'Mass media and the internet'. Tough it becomes easier for one to find and know in a particular news, the news itself is losing it's importance. If we look back in history we clearly see that sometimes 'one single' news was enough to make people curious enough to investigate further and nowadays people scroll down thousand of news and the reaction is nothing.
First of all, the number of news sources have become huge and people are confused to believe which one of them. As it is easy to create a online news portal and publish news, people sometimes find different stories of same event.
Secondly, people become lassitude these days, they just scroll down and read the headlines. We always find some news that are specially made to capture our attention, they are mostly celebrati and sports related news.
Moreover, true news are mixed with false stories and posted in the internet and citizens found it really confounding. Some online news and medias specially work for particular political parties and always try to covert their bad sides and focus on what social works their group have done.
If all the issues are considered we can conclude that millions of online news and social media creates uncounted number of news where most of them are false and imitated and people find very difficult to believe which of them are true.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective, and the comma is missing. Did you mean 'every day, we'?
Suggestion: Every day, we
Everyday we find lots of news in internet and media...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ch one of them. As it is easy to create a online news portal and publish news, pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 276.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80797101449 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23868188838 2.79657885939 80% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539855072464 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6286822738 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.583333333 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145197579537 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670367743872 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405220148656 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08270564079 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035569850693 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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