Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.
Formal education broadens our minds and spirits and for this fact, each and every people of a nation must be educated from formal institutions.
Napoleon once said ''give me an educated mother, I will give you an educated nation''. Education being the backbone of a nation, is essential for the development of a country. If majority of the people of a nation remains illiterate then it becomes hard for that nation to thrive in this competing era. However, the education people will receive should be properly designed having explicit outcomes. Without a properly designed formal education, it is not possible to gain the targeted outcome. For instance, in Bangladesh education system is designed in such a way that a child will get admitted in class one in its early childhood. That child will move on with time towards the end of its secondary school certificate examination after completing class ten and higher secondary certificate examination after completing class twelve. Upon completing the higher secondary certificate examination he will admit in any universities of his choice, of course if he wants to complete his higher studies. The study curriculum set from the very beginning up to the higher secondary in such a way that the child who will go through the process will have a broader outlook in mind and spirit compared to a child who has not gone through the process or completed only a portion of it and eventually dropped out. The education which is given in those twelve academic years contains basic knowledge of mathematics, science, sociology, religion, language et cetera and the knowledge of those subjects is a desideratum in the day to day life of a person.
Ensuring formal education for each and every people of the society can solve many problems which are otherwise not solve able. For instance, early child marriage was a common problem for Bangladesh. But in the past few decades the rate of child marriage has plummeted as the literacy rate has increased to a great amount. Government of Bangladesh has taken attempt to educate each and every person and for this, it has made formal education upto secondary level free for every child. Besides, government is providing free books and scholarships to enhance the rate of literacy because without ensuring formal education for the countryman every development attempt of the government will be thwarted.
However, it must be ensured the curriculum on which the education system depends is properly designed. If the curriculum is flawed then the total effort of the government will be hampered. A wrong curriculum will shrink the mind and spirit of a person in place of widening. So, the authority must be careful while designing study curriculum for the society.
A properly designed formal education will surely broad the mind and spirit of a person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, second, so, then, while, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2370.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 469.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05330490405 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76231094302 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462686567164 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 774.0 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5462814724 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.857142857 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177035803835 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623211534361 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721899184959 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151127019533 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835025350851 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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