The general welfare of a nation's people is a better indication of that nation's greatness than are the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
To begin, a nation is a community of people sharing common culture, tradition, economic and ethnic within demarcated territory.Certainly a Nation greatness can be vindicated through balance between people's welfare and achievements
of its rulers, arts, Scientists.To my opinion this standpoint can be analyzed and deliberated through a case by
case study.
A nation that is rich in achievements of its rulers ,arts,Scientists or affluent in resources may virtually
gets the accolade of being prominent or superlative all over the world,But actually it does not qualify for being great
In Retrospect,if that would have been the case Roman empires with great rulers and military power would never have fallen,and Nazi empire with great Scientific reign would have ruled over the world ,and Similarly Russia and Arab countries
with high abundance of natural resources would have flourished. All those achievements are not at all worthful enough
to boast about if it does not look towards the welfare of its public.
Going Further when we talk about people's welfare it encompasses overall that is economic , social ,cultural and
political wellness of its people.There should not be any discrimination on the basis of color, caste and creed
A law that would render equal right as well as social, cultural and political freedom to every section of the
society.It should safeguard the need and interest of every individuals of society. To paraphrase a maxim by Mahatma Gandhi" a nation greatness is measured how its weakest is treated".Hence poor and socially backward should be uplifted, they should feel left out or oppressed.
Many countries in the world in spite of affluent in art,science and resources still fails to facillitate even with basic need to their citizens.For example take the case of India a developing country is rich in culture art and science but lacks financial and social stability among its people. Same is the case of north Korea rich in military and weapons However people are deprived of basic freedom.In European Countries public welfare is always sought and concerned most above anything.
Thus to sum up a country should always rank, its public welfare, growth and development. and then off course focus towards scientific , military, artistic development and enhancement that would help it to acheive an eminent spot in the world and that's how it would be said great.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, however, if, look, may, similarly, so, still, then, thus, well, for example, as well as, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2050.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 384.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33854166667 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00715050725 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575520833333 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 23.0359550562 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.512556814 60.3974514979 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 227.777777778 118.986275619 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.6666666667 23.4991977007 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7777777778 5.21951772744 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.97078651685 262% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 7.80617977528 436% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148058724748 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597301104497 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042504348757 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575416484377 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042253161761 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 14.1392134831 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 48.8420337079 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 12.1743820225 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.58 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.38706741573 125% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 11.2143820225 168% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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