"Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in
order to thrive, because it is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved
and generated."
With the rapid modernization of the world and advent of technology one must endure to preserve the cultural traditions and underpin their steady generation and maintanance. Otherwise, it will be pages in history of human kind lost in the abyss, obscured forever. Cultural traditions depict the historical significance of a regions and places human beings have inhabited since their advent on this planet. It is not entirely agreeable, that the major cities be provided financial support to maintain the cultural traditions of a nation. There are deep founded reasons that can be cited and we can explore.
Cultural Traditions and customs of a nation have been observed to thrive in relatively smaller areas of human settlement, in general. A significant reasoning that justifies the above observation is that the smaller communities foster better social development and help in the generation of culture and related traditions that are unique to the community. One of the best examples one can provide is of the country of India. The vast terrain housing more than a billion people has a exhillarating farrago of traditions that vary according to the regions and wellknown historical events that had an influence on them. A person travelling from the extremeties of this vast peninsular land mass will be stupefied to find the variation and motley of traditional customs and beliefs within miles of separation from each other. On the other hand, the major cities in India namely New Delhi, and Mumbai have rather significantly lesser traditional influences ingrained in them.
Pertaining to the previous example we can also establish that global cities are largely influenced by foreign cultures. Major cities are hubs where the local surrounding traditions from the smaller towns and settlements descry a nexus. The major cities can be compared to the sea where the contents of the river conflate. The global foreign influence along with the national traditions and customs result into a hodgepodge that do not really do justice to the a nation's own cultural traditions.
One might argue that the major cities might need financial support to evince the local cultures and traditions to the rest of the world due to its ubiquitious influence. It may help the remaning world to be abreast of a nation's culture and heritage. Though it is true the Government should ensure that the local and smaller towns and cities that foster and preserve them at the first place, must receive appropriate financial support. It is after that, the preserved and thriving cultural heritage of the nation can be limned to the World.
In sum, the goverment must do triage to provide adequate financial support to smaller towns and cities where the majority of the nation's cultural heritage is preserved. It must then be the priority to appropriately fund the major cities to bolster the smaller cities in their effort to preserve the culture by upholding the same to world beyond the nation's boundaries, using its wider and possibly global outreach.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, really, so, then, well, in general, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2548.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 493.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16835699797 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76822543436 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474645030426 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 801.9 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7922213415 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4761904762 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402807028056 0.243740707755 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122893515482 0.0831039109588 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936260837179 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248854451516 0.150359130593 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861424375302 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 100.480337079 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.