Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
“Governments” do they do anything what is required of them on time? Is there a right answer to that? I don’t know.” I think that all the governments work towards their own benefit and in doing so they only focus on solving what is or will be beneficial for their tenure and what helps them to get re-elected and that also varies depending upon how far or near the elections are. Reflecting on the following examples, one can comprehend how governments work only for their own welfare.
In Pakistan as soon as the elections approach, a year or may be two, depending upon the amount of time required to amend a particular problem, different political sectors come into action. Since there are four different provinces in Pakistan, each party, native to its province, starts to promote change by their speeches and campaign. The elections are just around the corner, and in Karachi, which lies in Sindh; the Sindh Government started repairing the main highways of Karachi from an year before in hopes to get elected. There was no sign of any government official 3 years before and it has been a long time since the roads were dilapidated and needed exigent repairs. People continued to travel with the distress and now, out of blue, Sindh Government showed up to the rescue. Not so much sudden, as a political move.
On the other hand, when a political party gets elected and wins most seats in the major provinces, then depending upon which state the party belonged to, has all the development and progress taking place. The previous government that was elected in Pakistan belonged to Punjab. And since there selection, they have only developed and forwarded Punjab by introducing a Bus Transit System, giving free laptops to university going students through Prime Minister Scheme. And other provinces just got unsound roads, traffic congestion and no electricity.
So, in my opinion, Governments only solve problems immediate or anticipated only when they feel the need to and when it is worthy of their self interest and proves beneficial to them in any sort of way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a
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... the other hand, when a political party gets elected and wins most seats in the majo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, i think, sort of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 352.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96590909091 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79105691606 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6510030238 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.533333333 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4666666667 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1054988527 0.243740707755 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303320899086 0.0831039109588 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321914572975 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683515283683 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358065603225 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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