Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The government is an entity in our society which governs each and every situation. Thus the necessity of existence of healthy government is required, to keep the society healthy. The immediate problems are problems are the problems, which society are facing currently. These problems are the major ones and deciding factors for the next generations of society. The important point is government has to focus on finding solutions to such problems such that in future people do not have to suffer from other major problems arising from these current problems.
Now, we might say that problem is a problem. The society is an amalgamation of people and there problems. A poor person is facing a problem of not able to make more money because not withstanding with other people financially. A farmer might be facing a problem of incorrect income, electricity cuts or water shortage. On the other side, the rich person might be facing a problem of puddles on road when he is in the vehicle or the fear of increasing crime rate. However, these all kind of people are the part of society and irrespective of their financial needs or some personal problems, the entity government is common. So while solving problems, government should think of society and not an individual person.
The time span of existing government is limited in some countries where election happens. In this case it is necessary to focus on the current problems and policies, society is facing so that it is easier to focus on the enhancements if the same government gets reelected in the next cycle. Also there is one plus point of getting re-elected if the government gives people what they want. In today's world of technology and science it is very important to solve problems in a society. So that the advancements in the science and technology will be used for betterment and not out of hatred. This is very important to diminish the roots of hatred.
There are very important points to get acquainted with the new things or process of understanding existing things such as presentation, impact, knowledge, profit or loss. Every human mind available on earth thinks this way. While governing the society and implementing the policies to solve problems, government also has to make sure that these key points are easily understandable by people. Now to make them understand government has to make sure they are reachable to every corner of society. If government will make sure to cover every angle of the society, it is easier for the government itself to govern the society from the positive feedback.
The chance of healthy society and government will also positively impact on the policies which relates to other countries and states. The admiration of other states and countries; and the idea of friendly relations ought to increase. There is a broader perspective here , if government will focus on solving current problems.
In the end, the author perspective over solving current problems have many gains to the government and a society. This gives government a upper hand while doing business in implementing policies for future as well as it will increase over all GDP of country. The chance of average development is very much possible in every sector of the industry. Also, these things will help governments now and in future to make enhancements easily without any obscurity
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...which governs each and every situation. Thus the necessity of existence of healthy g...
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'problems are'.
Suggestion: problems are
...keep the society healthy. The immediate problems are problems are the problems, which society are facing ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...nment gets reelected in the next cycle. Also there is one plus point of getting re-e...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ase. There is a broader perspective here , if government will focus on solving cur...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will focus on solving current problems. In the end, the author perspective over ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nt and a society. This gives government a upper hand while doing business in impl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, well, while, as to, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2811.0 2235.4752809 126% => OK
No of words: 561.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01069518717 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86676880123 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76748972526 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.427807486631 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 891.0 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7346895742 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.56666666667 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204081365758 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063488563619 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595963770296 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118400427799 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412600693981 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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