3)In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The field of inquiry is a important part in every industry. The type of inquiry may change in every industry but, a perspective is required and to develop this perspective a knowledge is required. The beginner is just more likely to think on the individual level more than the expert which mainly thinks on the organisation level.
An inquiry means, to make research on things before suggesting a course of action. The areas of research and ways to do this requires tools, softwares that is knowledge. For any beginner, the knowledge is necessary and only expert can guide him on the knowledge part. The more he gains knowledge the more he comes close to the topic. When this happens, there is a better chance for an individual to think on the topic. The interest about the topic has to be generated before doing any inquiry. The experts in the particular field also have interest in the topic, that is why they are experts. Whereas individual has just entered and still learning. But this does not mean that a beginner can do investigation more clearly and perfectly than an expert. The point here is in the thought process. An expert might overcome some conditions while making an inquiry, thinking that they are not practically possible. Whereas, a beginner will cover every aspect. He might do reasearch on the things which are not practically possible and might find some other way to achieve it practically. This might take more time or investment of more money, but it is advisable on large scale. This investment done by the beginner and essentially done by company on the beginner, might help company taking more advanced approach or completely eradicating the process.
The awareness of the surrounding situation in the same industry is much important while doing an inquiry. How other competitors handle the situation or any new way has been introduced in some other section of the industry which can be implemented everywhere. This kind of information has to imparted in any industry by an expert. The beginner will then search about these things find the information available on the world wide web , find the loopholes according to his mind, get the things clarified by an expert. This process is essential for the betterment of company as well as for the development of beginner. An expert has to take care of many other things before implementing the plan or suggesting the course of action. But the beginner has the time and ability to do inquiry about many small things. So that, on a larger scale when the plan is implemented , it has covered all the corners.
Multi-National Companies(MNC'S) often keeps the ratio of beginner to expert more because they believe that investment in the beginner is going to enhance the companies future more. Apart from this, financially also they have to pay less to individuals than same number of experts. This is the main reason why we can see only or two technical architects leading couple of projects with lots of beginners.
In the end, inquiry has to be done on every angles of the situation. The industries can afford this by having more number of beginners and less experts because the combined power of understanding things from a small scale to large scale can be done easily. This inquiry helps the matter to be understandable and implementable on an industry level.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
The field of inquiry is a important part in every industry. The t...
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Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'knowledge'.
Suggestion: knowledge
...equired and to develop this perspective a knowledge is required. The beginner is just more ...
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Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...is perspective a knowledge is required. The beginner is just more likely to think o...
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Line 3, column 910, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...that they are not practically possible. Whereas, a beginner will cover every aspect. He...
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Line 5, column 432, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ormation available on the world wide web , find the loopholes according to his min...
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Line 5, column 865, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...arger scale when the plan is implemented , it has covered all the corners. Mult...
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Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun experts is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... by having more number of beginners and less experts because the combined power of u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, then, well, whereas, while, apart from, as for, as to, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2773.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 567.0 442.535393258 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89065255732 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87972968509 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74594769597 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437389770723 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 887.4 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 17.0 4.99550561798 340% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7047619002 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.65625 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.71875 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28125 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 18.0 4.83258426966 372% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167724744904 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454772575943 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361966264921 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101250505093 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392249076821 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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