Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and suppor

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Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

The arts and culture show the heritage and the traditions of a country. They give international recognition to the country and help in its development.The issue mentioned here is very relevant and needs to be discussed in-depth. Despite the assertion that only institutions like the military should have the king's ransom of the investments by the government, it is imperative to understand that arts also need to be funded by the government to give access to the world to the culture and practices of that particular country.I am of the opinion that the arts should be provided with the required investments by the government just like they do with the military.

The chief reason for my view is that arts help the communities in the country to earn their livelihood which in turn contributes to the economy of the country.For example, the tribal artifacts created by the North East Indian population depicts their rich culture and the traditions there and also helps them thrive as many people flock to buy them.Hence, arts when properly interested will help bring in people around the world to purchase the said art and making the art famous to people of different cultures.

Another reason for my view is that art also brings people together as one.Whenever there is something unique in some part of the world, people from different parts of the world come in hoards to visit and appreciate the uniqueness.Lets take of the example the Russian dolls, which are quite famous and sought after by many people around the world.Along with buying the art people also get to know the different characteristics of that particular region or country.The result is that the art brings into the light many aspects of a region which was not previously known and gives livelihood to a myriad of people.

Although it can be said that institutions like the military are very important for the national security and safety of a country.They can also be referred to as one the important pillars of any government and it should be sufficiently funded.Yet, it still does not mean that the arts should be neglected in the favor of the military as both are equally imperative to a administration's success nationally and internationally.The arts can contribute heavily economically to the country, if they are properly marketed and invested it.Finally, arts should not be sidelined in favor of the military and equal attention should be paid to both.

Due all these above stated reasons,I therefore would like to state that all the institutions of s particular government should be paid equal attention.And the a way must be figured out to distribute the funds in a more productive among the arts and the military.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, so, still, therefore, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2254.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 452.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98672566372 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98704029808 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466814159292 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 708.3 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 23.0359550562 278% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 206.885554481 60.3974514979 343% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 322.0 118.986275619 271% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.5714285714 23.4991977007 275% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 5.21951772744 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173340285253 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829659319154 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422092407162 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980676144004 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320326106272 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.4 14.1392134831 243% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.52 48.8420337079 13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 12.1743820225 232% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.55 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 27.6 11.2143820225 246% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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