Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Although, many people believe that government should not provide financial assistence to scientific research whose possible outcomes are not certain, I believe that most of the scientific researches fall into this category. Therefore, such an uncertainity should not restrict us from discovering new things or inventing new things.
First, to illustrate the significance of scientific research, I would like to take space research as an example. This is one of the extremely challenging fileds for humans among rest of the research firms. Because, our universe is extremely huge and if you consider our universe as a whole our existence is almost insignificant. Irrespective of the fact that we do not have access to most of the universe, we have successfully landed on moon as well as mars. Before landing on moon, there was no guarantee that our mission would be successful. But, it was worth putting the effort. This applies to artificial satellite lauching as well. These satellites are used by vast applications like weather forecast, many mobile application etc. But probability of success of these missions is not hundred percent always. Money involved in implementing such project is huge and government support is indeed necessary.
In addition to this, research in the field of medicine is another good example. While medical filed is continually progressing in terms of research and development, there are still diseases for which there is no mdecine to cure. For instance, AIDS is one such example. There are still diseases for which true cause is unknown. There is no guarantee that we are going to immedietly succeed in finding answers to medical conundrums, but continuous effort might definetly help in achieving success. We will have to face multiple failures, but we can convert failures as pavement to our success.
Finally, I would like to say to say that money involved in major scientific research is huge and if the research do not succeeds, then it is great loss to our society. But we should also consider the fact that if such research becomes successful would it be worth the effort? If the answer to this question is yes, then we should definetly go for it.
In summary, I would like to say that outcome of most of the scientific researches are unknown at the beginning because there could be many internal and external factors which might affect the success of our research. But, it is always good to take risk and continue with our work. If we do not succeed at first attempt then we can learn from our mistakes. On the other hand, if we succeed then we can think of next big challenges.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...ity of success of these missions is not hundred percent always. Money involved in imple...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...f these missions is not hundred percent always. Money involved in implementing such pr...
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to say'.
Suggestion: to say
... our success. Finally, I would like to say to say that money involved in major scientific...
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Message: Did you mean 'succeed'?
Suggestion: succeed
...arch is huge and if the research do not succeeds, then it is great loss to our society. ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o take risk and continue with our work. If we do not succeed at first attempt then...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in summary, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2190.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 440.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97727272727 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78325497655 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502272727273 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 680.4 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0600291302 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14024839207 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383839955075 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393303972748 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083992608583 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136099010029 0.0667264976115 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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