Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In devel

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Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

The author adduced that the governor should provide free education for all students in the society, this is the claim with which I partially do concur. Among the countless reasons which give adherence to my viewpoint, I will list two vital reasons which depict my agreement with the claim and one reason which shows from which perspective I disagree with this assertion.
The first striking fact which should be considered is the difficulty of the poor students at preparing their education fee. Indeed, each school possesses the costs and requires the financial support which does not completely fulfill with government rearing. In this scenario, the school completes its demand from the students under the title of the tuition fee. This tuition fee is higher than some families’ monthly income and considered as the extra burden over the family. Consequently, students whose parents cannot support their educational cost, give up their education in the middle. According to the noteworthy refreshingly statistic released by the Daily Newspaper in Iran, unfortunately annually forty percent of the students from the low-income family quit their education after their graduation from high school. Therefore, as they do not receive the high-level education, they own the low-salary affair such as the labor and worker; in addition, the chain of poverty will be continued in the same family. However, if there will be a free educational system for this category of society, there will be an enhancement in the financial stand of the denizens in the society.
Another equal crux reason which should be considered is the support of talented students. In fact, the term of talented students is those students who finished their previous education with the owner of a top student should receive the financial rearing from the leader in their future education. Actually, as mentioned in the previous paragraph, the education in the higher level requires extra money, and in some cases, students at this stand for continuing their education are obliged to work in a part-time job. This work intakes the entire energy and concentration from the student; therefore, he cannot study with his entire energy. A lucid example which shed the spotlights over this reason is the instance of the cousin who finished his high-school education from one the prestige school with top score and ranked as the first student among his classmates; on the other hand, during his study at the university, he started to work on the part-time job to handle his daily life and education cost; this working deprived his whole energy and prevents him to finish his education in the university with the same first ranking as he did in the high-school.
However, what was discussed in two previous paragraphs should be overgeneralized to entice students. Indeed, the wealthy students who own endless financial support from their parents should be exceptional from the list of the students who gained the funding from the government; since they are capable of continuing their education without any burden and worry, it would be a wise idea to get money from this category to support the schools. This idea seems more appealing if the limited budget of the leader and different sectors which require the money are considered. In another word, if schools get money from this group, they could provide the free education for tow abovementioned groups; furthermore, the governor could invest its money on the other category and flourish the society.
To wrap it up, all aforementioned reasons explicitly illustrate that the school should get money from wealthy students and provide the free charge system for the poor and talented student to continue their education.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed student to continue their education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, in addition, in fact, such as, in some cases, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3136.0 2235.4752809 140% => OK
No of words: 604.0 442.535393258 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19205298013 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95746018188 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70436162027 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438741721854 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 957.6 704.065955056 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.0028060823 60.3974514979 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.8 118.986275619 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 23.4991977007 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163076030918 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651985133759 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559489090137 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121947165035 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655568575812 0.0667264976115 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 14.1392134831 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 100.480337079 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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