Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.
The author of the statement claim that governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students. Many of us will argue that it will hold all the time and others will counter the statement by providing an example in support of their claim. In my essay, I will highlight both the side of the statement and will provide reasoning for the same.
Education is one of the important tool that will enlighten the society and through education, we can revolutionize the world. So, it should be accessed to every individual in the world despite their race color ethnicity and religion and the government must provide it by effective and efficient means.
Now the question of whether education should be offered free to college and university students? According to me yes it should be because then only colleges and universities will be accessed by all and to get into the colleges will be the only matter of marks you score and this will be good for those families also who can not afford the hefty fees of colleges and universities.
But if you look at countries like India and China, where there is a huge population, it will be difficult for the government to offer free education because it will affect their economy as they have to provide free education to a large number of their population. So, it will be hard for the country's like them and also to the countries like Pakistan and Venezuela where the economy is about to crumble.
So what the countries with huge population can do is that they can provide scholarship to the student who can not afford the colleges and university fees. So, they don't have to give up their dream and help them to become the helping hand of their family.
In nutshell, we can say that the government should offer free education to college and university students depend upon the condition of their country's economy and the population of that country. So, if the country's economic condition is good and the population is not too much than the government should provide free education, else they can go for the scholarship as an option.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 5, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...y effective and efficient means. Now the question of whether education should be offered free to col...
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Line 6, column 98, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ree to college and university students? According to me yes it should be because then only coll...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... they have to provide free education to a large number of their population. So, it will be hard f...
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Line 10, column 156, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...fford the colleges and university fees. So, they dont have to give up their dream ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... colleges and university fees. So, they dont have to give up their dream and help th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 12.4196629213 209% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78415300546 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60831670129 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445355191257 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6962215537 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.692307692 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1538461538 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354370025933 0.243740707755 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168919499146 0.0831039109588 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.217345764702 0.0758088955206 287% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185204583667 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1006265009 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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