The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Human mind is the most powerful creation in the world. The prompt states that human brain is superior to the machines because machines are made by humans with the help of their brains. In my opinion, I agree with the statement and argue that machines can never be superior than the human minds.
To begin, whatever creation made in this world is solely dependent on the inventor’s brain. A machine is only developed starting from the designing phase till the testing phase. During this process, in each stage human brain should be important to either develop or to test the invention. For instance, Steve Jobs developed the computer. After a while, bill gates have improvised it. This example states that the new innovation that took place, there is a human brain but not some machine.
Further, any calculation or any logic insisted on the device is made by human. In that case, if there is a slight error in the calculation then the whole development goes wrong. For instance, consider a computer. In computer, there is everything. There are few semiconductors, microprocessors, microchips, microcontrollers etc. There is also a monitor for display. There is an Operating System for the working of the system. In all these cases, the primary development is made by people using their minds. Hence it is the human being’s brain that is more important than the machines logic.
In most of the living creatures, humans use their brain to the greatest potential. They might use brain for development or maybe destruction. For instance, in the movie irobot a robot was developed. However, its primary purpose is to kill the humans as they are superior to the robots. Here the robots are filled with the negative emotions. But these emotions are filled by the people itself.
Every human being must understand that all the machines developed are not so superior than any person. It is the human’s creation whatsoever. But if brain used in a right way can produce great results. However, if used in a negative way it exacerbates the situation. This is one of the negative impact for many developing machines as many think that creating a futuristic machines can make the humans extinct.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
...gue that machines can never be superior than the human minds. To begin, whateve...
Line 5, column 419, Rule ID: NEW_XX
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
...ovised it. This example states that the new innovation that took place, there is a human brain...
Line 9, column 507, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
...nt is made by people using their minds. Hence it is the human being's brain that...
Line 9, column 580, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'machines'' or 'machine's'?
Suggestion: machines'; machine's
...s brain that is more important than the machines logic. In most of the living creat...
Line 17, column 87, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
... machines developed are not so superior than any person. It is the human's crea...
Line 17, column 166, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... creation whatsoever. But if brain used in a right way can produce great results. However, if ...
Line 17, column 225, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...produce great results. However, if used in a negative way it exacerbates the situation. This is o...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 369.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0081300813 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79459644979 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506775067751 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3079296714 60.3974514979 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.724137931 118.986275619 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.724137931 23.4991977007 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.75862068966 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230428498376 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060298748702 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684080563782 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152670153962 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941180989488 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
automated_readability_index: 8.5 14.1392134831 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.89 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.