If rituals did not exist we have to invent them. We need ceremonies and rituals to help us define ourselves social and culturally.
Rituals and ceremonies are events rooted in ancient times in which people gather together for celebrating, suffering or praying. It is still a continuous debate whether rituals are vital to forming process of culture of a society. In my opinion, rituals and ceremonies definitely shape the traditions of a society and feed its unity by giving them spiritual opportunity of sharing same emotions.
Firstly, ceremonies and rituals have a role of revealing several facts about a society, namely, its sufferings, traditions, habits and glories. In other words, they shape and shows the identity of this specific society. We can predict their approaches by just looking at its ceremonies and rituals. For instance, in Turkey, before wedding preparations, family of groom has to go the house of bride and take their permission. This illustrates that this society is conservative and they still want to protect some traditional values.
Besides, this traditional events strengthen their unities and make them able to endure next centuries, leave a print. For example, in Greek societies, after hunting sessions, they a have a routine of scratching the scenes of hunts to the walls of caves. In this way, historians have discovered many facts and had an idea of living conditions and habits of ancient people. Correspondingly, their presence is still being talking by people.
In conclusion, considering all these, we can firmly say that if there were no ceremonies and rituals, we would definitely fill this blank with an alternative to share moments.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, look, so, still, then, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 247.0 442.535393258 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2995951417 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92512853188 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623481781377 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8297988475 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.692307692 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.21951772744 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177812269615 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567019954837 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504699757767 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108429991774 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431603447595 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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