The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves. I fully agree with this statement because of the indirect impact it has on health, family and relationships. Although this rapid pace has its advantages which include, innovation and technology, it is still considered largely a demerit rather than a merit.
In today’s world where everything moves so fast, there is need for tasks to be achieved at the shortest possible time. This has brought about the advent of technology which has replaced basic human emotions. The internet has provided an easier way to contact and chat with loved ones without actually having to be there with parents paying more attention to smart phones and laptops than forming bonds with their children. These children then grow up and the concept of intimacy and love becomes foreign to them. The rapid pace of life and the need to move on with it has brought about alienation of emotions causing problems that could be passed from generation to generation.
Furthermore, the need to make money, work faster never really gives one the opportunity to appreciate simple pleasures of life or slow down. This can be disastrous to health and overall well being. There is no longer time to plant in the gardens and make healthy meals as takeout is the preferred option. The need to meet deadlines murders sleep. There is now little or no time to exercise or go for vacations all in the name of fat bonuses at the end of the year. Overall the effect of these actions may lead to a non healthy lifestyle which may pose some serious consequences in the near future.
Social gatherings and relationships may also be affected. It is recommended that the average human being takes time to do an activity or join a club i.e book club. Nowadays, no one has time to do any of these which can have a negative impact in the future. The bond formed with other people doing the same activities with you is different from the family bond and may prove useful if you are looking to socialize or network. It might actually be helpful because some of these people may have similar interest or experience to yours. It is very beneficial in the sense that one could learn from peer’s experience.
Even though I agree that the rapid pace of life brings about creativity and innovation in the sense that people get more inventive when they want things done faster, it still has direct or indirect effects on the most important things in a humans life which are love, health and relationships.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...fects on the most important things in a humans life which are love, health and relatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, if, look, may, really, so, still, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 439.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75854214123 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53282885424 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542141230068 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.188983031 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4761904762 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9047619048 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47619047619 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224904642553 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603776409716 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820615791083 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129036010129 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752094551024 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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