It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
A human is considered to be a hero when he or she does something good to the society. Thus the term Hero has more meaning than what children visualise them as. In my opinion, I partially disagree to the claim that there is no such thing as hero in our society for three reason.
To begin with, Heroes are those who present a good deed towards the society. They are people who made a revolution. For example, at some point of time, every country has experienced war and those wars are won or lost by soldiers who sacrifice their life for the well-being of the others. Mahatma Gandhi played a major role in India’s freedom. His followers were loyal to him and participated many protests. Inspired by Gandhi other social reformers like Jawaharlal Nehru, Bala Gangather Tilak and many more fought with other countries. Even today they are considered as heroes and are the reason for freedom in India. Thus, a Hero can also be visualised as someone who is as mundane and simple as everyone, working as a group or as an individual, to shape the society.
Secondly, Each and every person idolises another person who are considered as heroes for those individuals. For example, in the field of music, BTS is a well-known band and is an inspiration for more than half of the world’s population. They have profound lyrics which speaks about loving oneself, speaking up for themselves and most importantly how one’s life matter in the society even if they are facing hard ships. They play a great role in people who are in depression, stress and pressure by creating songs which inspire people to work hard even at such conditions. One of the lyrics convey that, there are a lot of stars and each star has its own feature and thus every star is important in the constellation. Here the stars signify their fans, who they collectively call as “army” and that every one of them is important for BTS’s existence which represents the constellation hence caring about people who may not have been loved or cared at a point of time. Thus, Heroes in the name of music play a great role in a person who may be a student or worker having a hard time to cope up with the society.
Thirdly, a typical stereotype’s for describing a “hero” are a person who wears a mask and cape, flies across the word and saves people who are in danger by fighting bad people while those people are considered as the “Police” nowadays without a cape and a mask. It is not about the costume or fighting but about a change which will be brought to the society. For example, Electronic industries making equipment’s for handicapped people. It’s a sad truth that handicapped people are not treated the same way as a normal person which is why innovative findings advances in creating supportable to make them feel normal. Industrial experts who are creating these machinery are considered as heroes to handicapped people. Another example is the idea of charity which is the happiness of giving food or clothing to people who don’t have those facilities. Thus there are all sorts of heroes who make a contribution to the society in one or another way.
However, there are times when humanity is lost when no hero is available which the case is for George Froyd and it is a scary moment to society. But there is always a time when the sun shines and we will have a chance to fight as a hero and make a society filled with a hero within ourselves.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...she does something good to the society. Thus the term Hero has more meaning than wha...
^^^^
Line 4, column 655, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this machinery' or 'these machineries'?
Suggestion: this machinery; these machineries
...al. Industrial experts who are creating these machinery are considered as heroes to handicapped...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 851, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...people who don’t have those facilities. Thus there are all sorts of heroes who make ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, while, for example, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 40.0 19.5258426966 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 29.0 11.3162921348 256% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2828.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 609.0 442.535393258 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64367816092 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96768813016 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62515617913 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474548440066 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 909.9 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2795942176 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.740740741 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.96296296296 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158255027427 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490227378222 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342419412028 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105965613472 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215860074554 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...she does something good to the society. Thus the term Hero has more meaning than wha...
^^^^
Line 4, column 655, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this machinery' or 'these machineries'?
Suggestion: this machinery; these machineries
...al. Industrial experts who are creating these machinery are considered as heroes to handicapped...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 851, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...people who don’t have those facilities. Thus there are all sorts of heroes who make ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, while, for example, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 40.0 19.5258426966 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 29.0 11.3162921348 256% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2828.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 609.0 442.535393258 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64367816092 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96768813016 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62515617913 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474548440066 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 909.9 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2795942176 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.740740741 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.96296296296 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158255027427 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490227378222 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342419412028 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105965613472 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215860074554 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.