It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In
developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or
examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The auther states that there is no living man or woman could be venerated as a hero in nowadays society. This statement could be evaluated as an invalid one. This evaluation is addressed through a set of evidences.
For instance, the state of idealism and could be portaied by a remarkable struggling that is sustained by just a simple man or woman who raised up his / her child to success however the hard living standard of nowadays life. Perhaps this man or woman sacrifaction to his or her child is not the the social spot lights and no one could even know about the a specific person offer to his / her child to be raised up within the ultimate best aspects however the hard living aspects of this man or woman life. Thus, the statement invalidity would be protraied.
Furthermore, the tendency of actions to be model as hero action is not experienced through a commonplace or easy simple condition of living. Whereas, the life demands and standard of living become tougher and harder as more decates are counted on the univeral age calender. Thus, the more complicated times and harder living demands would reveal more and more heros than it had been ever before.
Conversely, as some critics state that societies’ manners and state of idealism are in continous declination versus annual calender increment. These critics maybe intended to shape that there is no ideal complete person of the least negative charcteristics nowadays as the simple easy going pure people of the past centuries. However these critics perespective is true, the hard standard living conditions of the recent centuries are itself a reason of engendering a new version of heros who withstand these tough living conditions and keep there own purity and simplicity not influenced under any circumstances.
These previously illustrated evidences are a sample of a set of evidences that could lead to a proper investigation of the author’s statement validation. Whereas, it is clearly extrapolated that the statement is invalid as each era conditions would engender specific heros defination adopted by the existing societies’ of this era.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...n or woman could be venerated as a hero in nowadays society. This statement could be evalua...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... addressed through a set of evidences. For instance, the state of idealism and ...
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Line 2, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple man or woman who raised up his / her child to success however the hard living...
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Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...sacrifaction to his or her child is not the the social spot lights and no one could eve...
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Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...sacrifaction to his or her child is not the the social spot lights and no one could eve...
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Line 2, column 355, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...lights and no one could even know about the a specific person offer to his / her chil...
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Line 2, column 424, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o his / her child to be raised up within the ultimate best aspects however the ha...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atement invalidity would be protraied. Furthermore, the tendency of actions to ...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ard of living become tougher and harder as more decates are counted on the univera...
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: CALENDER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'calendar', a system of organizing days? A 'calender' is a machine.
Suggestion: calendar
...decates are counted on the univeral age calender. Thus, the more complicated times and h...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re heros than it had been ever before. Conversely, as some critics state that s...
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Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...' manners and state of idealism are in continous declination versus annual ...
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Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f idealism are in continous declination versus annual calender increment. These ...
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Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: CALENDER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'calendar', a system of organizing days? A 'calender' is a machine.
Suggestion: calendar
...in continous declination versus annual calender increment. These critics maybe intended...
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Line 4, column 336, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...oing pure people of the past centuries. However these critics perespective is true, the...
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Line 4, column 551, Rule ID: THERE_OWN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
... these tough living conditions and keep there own purity and simplicity not influenced un...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot influenced under any circumstances. These previously illustrated evidences a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10285714286 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93164199612 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2865497028 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.571428571 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136754504023 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498832932104 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423031765218 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761213042096 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386374130109 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.