It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are generated and preserved.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
I completely disagree with the statement that in cities, cultural traditions are generated and preserved. Because in this modern world, in cities authority goving more prioroty in to enhance the beauties of the towns to compete with other places and moreover they are paying attention to make the town more modern rather than keep paying concern to the old cultural heritage. However, in village people are still living with old cultural values and norms and they are preserving it from the very early decades.
Firstly, this modern world is rapidly changing and its the impact of globalization.Consequently every modern cities making new building and destroying their old cultural building to enhance the cities beauties. For instance, if we look in to the city of northern asia region in Bangladesh, where we can not see old buildings and there is no sign of old cultural heritage to observe. Moreover, people are getting in to create more luxurious building such as five star hotels and motels rather than saving the old heritage.
Secondly, authority has no attention to save the cultural heritage in the cities to preserve that. Moreover, they are giving more priority on establishing modern culture in the town to make it more attractive to world wide. For example. in paris we see differnt types of new monuments, towers which are world famous but if we need to know the cultural values of their nations, we need to go to vist the village areas. Thus, cities are not preserving their old traditions.
On the other hand. village people are not updated with the world globalization. They are still living with their old values and norms. For example, in the village of southern India, Kalapur, where still village people celebrate their old cultural festivals which is not seen in town area. Moreover, they are preserving their cultural values in every steps of their life.
In Sum, cities are not preserving their old cultural heritage because they are giving more attention to the modern culture to keep pace with globalization. Moreover, there is no sign of old heritage buldings in town. Moreover, people need to go around village if they want to know the old cultural values and norms because village people still living with their old heritage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 376.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03723404255 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69848137296 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.404255319149 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3743958622 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.222222222 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 5.21951772744 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12835022977 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570392764487 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481557117878 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903960873403 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267907390041 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.